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Swordbreaker 02-25-07, 05:01 PM	***The Featherlands is my new campaign setting a long while in the making. This is only as detailed as I can get without scanning maps up onto here, which I lack the technology to do.*** CREATION STORY AND GODS Long ago, in times far forgotten, the world was just a barren orb before the throne of the sun. The world sat this way for coiuntless aeons, until a mysertious being known as Pendragon came into being. Noone knows what he looked like, or even his true name beyond Pendragon, but with his mighty six wings, he released glowing seeds onto the earth. The seeds almost instantly grew into the Flow, or where magic came from. From the Flow, the planes formed one after the other, from Celestia to Limbo and everything in between. But after a while, he soon realized that he could not watch everything by himself, so he split his power into nine equal parts, each one capable of his power, but to an extent. He gave them all a bir-like form, and named them. Valceron -God of Mercy Valceron is the Lawful and Good aspect of Pendragon. HIs form is either as a hawk or as a hawk-humaion wearing brilliant plate armor with red rubies. His divine weapin is the Lightbringer, a longsword forged from a solar flare. His domains are Law, Good, protection and Healing. he lives on Celestia Laborea -God of Laws Laborea is the extream lawful aspect of Pendragon. He appears either as an owl or as an owl human. HIs weapon is the peacemaker, a kukri made from the prayers of Archons. His domains are Law, Knowledge, Magic, and Plant. He lives on Mechanus. ***MORE TO COME***
GoriceXII 02-26-07, 04:07 AM	A few thoughts 1. Use a spellchecker. I think that you might be typing too fast. Try putting it on a word document or something, then spellcheck then paste. 2. Featherlands is an interesting name--I would wonder if I was a prospective DM looking at this world why the focus on birds--maybe you could go into that a little more?