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Hudson 04-03-04, 04:53 PM

right so I have this character concept which I would some suggestions and feedback on, he's a guy who was in a short story I wrote called El Chucho Del Diablo(I posted it on the short story board if anyone is interested, I'm not a very good writer in my own opinion though.) dealing with group of teenagers who well is hunted by this chucho(means dog in spanish). Ambrose is somehow connected to this Dog as his great grandfather was his his bloodthirsty gang in the wild west, they made El chucho eat his own balls and then hung him up in a tree where he made a pact witht he devil to get revenge, there wre only two who survived El chucho's vengeance and that was John Caleb(Ambrose' ancestor) and Gabriel(no surname). anyways after the encounter with El chucho this normal 18 year old becomes obsessed with the occult and fighting evil things(it killed his friends) traning to become somekind of monster hunter. so he's recruited by some order and is tranied becomming their best agent, then he goes rogue(not sure why), and now travels the world searching for evil. he's called the immortal dog because even amongst monsters he seems indestrucable, he heals very fast and is hardy adn strong. I was thinking starting out as a tough hero then maybe I dunno something else, i was actually contemplating amix between investigator and a custom class by someone else "the bruiser". what would his alligiance be, how would he react to the normal. what would he look like and what would he drive. doe she make his own weapons or does he have a weapons smith? oh yeah what race would he be? human? also now that I think about it aint that original is it? if anyone has any suggestions I'm willing to hear them:D