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Haun777 05-24-07, 08:16 PM	So here’s what I have only its not alot and it suck and I don’t know what his motivation for leaving home would be and I would like to add a bit more about him I just cant think of anything your help is very appreciated Caelvertha is the first of his family not to be a born Ranger. He loves the outdoors and loves Archery but He would just prefer to protect and heal people. Caelvertha loves to see people happy and hates to see harm done to them so he decided to become a Cleric. Caelvertha does respects all the Gods and does not worship any one God. Caelvertha in the tongue of eleven means “Healing Archer of peace” named this by his home people because every one of them had felt his healing touch. Caelvertha comes from a long line of Cael (Archer) males on his father side he started his training like all elves at age 15 in the bow and sword and although he was good with both he chose to focus on healing people and keeping them from harm rather then the weapons that can only cause such harm. Caelvertha will go out of his comfort zone to heal and aid another. Unlike his kin who have an expectation that other beings are equally able to care for themselves, which sometimes makes elves, appear haughty to other races. Caelvertha loves all things and is easy going. Thank you very much!
Terjon of the Blue Rose 05-25-07, 12:52 AM	Actually I have to disagree. It does not suck it is a very interesting premise. Perhaps you left home because you simply felt there was too much pain in the rest of the world and you could not stand by and just defend those close to you. If you're in Faerun the Church of Illmater teaches that the most noble goal is to relieve suffering in others. Perhaps you left because you felt the call to that church (or a similar one from your world) and it had no place in your home.
Haun777 05-25-07, 01:13 AM	Actually I have to disagree. It does not suck it is a very interesting premise. Perhaps you left home because you simply felt there was too much pain in the rest of the world and you could not stand by and just defend those close to you. If you're in Faerun the Church of Illmater teaches that the most noble goal is to relieve suffering in others. Perhaps you left because you felt the call to that church (or a similar one from your world) and it had no place in your home. Thank you I think I will use the whole "I want to heal the pain in the rest of the world" thing I think it fits him. Thank you Terjon of the blue rose for the help and motivation.
Haun777 05-26-07, 02:15 AM	Here I made a little Improvement. The Healing Archer of Peace Caelverthal was the first of his family not to take on the role of a Ranger. He loves the outdoors and loves Archery but he would much rather protect the weak and heal the sick and tormented. Caelverthal loves to see people happy and hates to see harm done to them so he decided to become a Cleric. Caelverthal does not worship one patron instead he heals and protects for the good of all good God and Goddesses and respects them for they are what give him the power to channel the positive energy to heal a wound or ease a feverish sleep. Caelverthal in the tongue of Elven means “Healing Archer of peace” Caelverthal was named this by his kin because every one of them had felt his healing touch and soothing words of hope. Caelverthal comes from a long line of Cael males on his father side they are all Rangers of Corellon Larethian who his father thinks he should worship, but gives his son time to correct his foolishness. Caelverthal started his training like all elves at age 15 in the bow and sword and although he was good with both he chose to focus on healing people and keeping them from harm rather then the weapons that can only cause such pain. Caelverthal will go out of his comfort zone to heal and aid another. Unlike his kin who have an expectation that other beings are equally able to care for themselves, which sometimes makes Elves, appear haughty to other races. Caelverthal left home because he simply felt there was too much pain in the rest of the world and he could not stand by and just defend those close to him, he must help the world.
Terjon of the Blue Rose 05-26-07, 05:02 AM	Very nice. A little more straight foward than my style but still very well written and clear. Congrats.