Post/Author/DateTime	Post
KOTARfan 12-08-06, 10:21 PM	i need help on a story line for a mandalorin soldier1/jedi crusader 19 who becomes the leader of the R.A. and takes controll the entire galexy. real name Edvard Akavirus Red ideas: born on planet whatever (some planet on the outwer rim) and becomes the planets premire arena duelist at age 9 joins r.a. at 18 supreme leader at 25 killings of emporer palpetine, mon mothna, and uniting of the two fighting factions using r.a. troopers, clone troopers, stormtroopers, and rebels, and a young bounty hunter named boba fett, defeates a rebourn seppretist fleat that use 27 entire worlds and porulations to make new even more powerful droids ending or war and final duel against the enemy's leader age 32 bounty hunting years 33-49 age 50- teaching skills to r.a. next generation generals and constantly dueling people who chalange him age 75 dueling in the galexy's arenas age 150 retirement still trains r.a generals age 300 (the force keeps him alive) death of a legacy
mato_hibiki 12-10-06, 05:43 PM	Well, for a storyline, you sort of need something people will be interested in listening to. I'll be honest, you're not going to get any kind responses to this sort of request... Er, except mine, I guess... If you call this being nice... Nobody is interested in god-modding. If you don't know what this is, look it up. Here's a hint; it's a baaaad thing to be doing. - "Yes, you're an almighty god, I get it." "Bow before me!" "No, I'd much rather kill you, simply because nobody deserves a god like you. No crime is worth that punishment."
theotherdraxen 12-10-06, 11:17 PM	Good characters have flaws and weaknesses. They aren't usually uber powerful, as most people lose interest quickly if there isn't any kind of viable threat. I suggest you rethink your character concept. No offense, of course.