if you mother was a angel and you father was a demon, you'ed be constapated too. [Archive] - Wizards Community

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CaptinKebler

01-06-04, 08:09 PM
okay, i have this charicter, Azuril, i want to make him a half-celetial/half-feind. My Dm has givin me the okay to do so knowing full well that this mix is technicaly impossoble. he also has allowed me to be a med sized charicter, who is imortal, with 20 levels for me to spend as i wish, so i can catch up to the rest of the group. he's only rule is that he must be neutral (LN,N,CN).

the only problem is that i can't make a story line for such a charicter that fits compleatly.

heres what i have so far.

at the early days of the blood war the god nyrull set out to build the altimete warrior. one who could fight with the furry of the celestials with the power of the demons. he sent to the material plane a group sucubi to tempt one family of men into giving away there youngest chiled.

the Succbbi found a yong mother barring child. they tricked her into handing over the chiled on the day of it's birth. the succubi qiuckly reterned to there master. who, had capterued a solar in battle and helb it presiner useing multiple magic circles agianst good.

Nyrull set the chiled onto an anvil that was to the left of the improsoned celestial then summed to his aid the demon prince Yllon. From the Two outsiders he pored there enegy onto the chiled. after 13 days of this energy mixing, nyrull took out his scyth and struck the chiled with it, pierceing into his soul, and removed the mortal coil from the chiled.

it's was sucsessful, the chiled mortal qualiteis had been torn from him and the chiled absorbed the two enegys of the outsiders into the gapeing pit that was torn into his soul. thus was born the first celestial/feind.

but there was a drawback to nyrulls planes, for the chiled longivity had been more influencial on the yong boys life span then the dark god had planed. by the time that the blood war was halfway to it's end (in my world that 6 million years) the youth had reached adulthood.

thus nerull began to teach the boy how to be a master of death. knowing that the boy would need not subtulty to his actions (the wings make for a pretty good get away) he taught the boy how to kill with power and tactics, then the ways of the death domian.

Azuril (the kid) never particualy belived in killing others for sport, but would rather that his targets die when there time was up. but not knowing any other way of life he just exepted this and moved on to his next victem.

by now Nerull had killed both the boys mother and father. this made waves in the relms the angles tred. they organized an exacpe plan to save the boy, as would be the wishes of his mother. when the day came that they would set there plot in motion, the celestial sent forward there men into the gates (as in the gate spell) that lead to nyrulls home.

there efforts proved in vian, as nyrull was well aware of there plan (being a god and all) and summond his forces to protect the boy.

but this atack proved to be the distraction needed for the boys excape. for as soon as the battle was in full, anther door opened to this plane (one other then the one that the angels made) and out came a hand that extended to out to the boy. (for clarifaction the boy stood atop of nyrulls temlple obilisk, away form his "godfather" and the portal was little more then 4 ft from the boy.) when it was over, nyrull was the victor but he could not find the ware abouts of his "godchiled". he blamed his diciperance on the clestials and the incompitance of his soldiers...

...100 milloin years later (present day)...
...the towns folk tell tailes of a follen angel who slays his victems in broad day light. and his attacks are either part of some grate divine (or devilish) plan, or to be compleatly random, nobody knows for sure.

amongst other items the angel wields a wicked two-sidded sword of emense power that has the power to talk by itself. it has been heard calling itself "nemises" and giving messages to it's weilder. the sword is rumerd to be invincyble and made of truely ancient magic (the sword has two diffrernt heads with two seperate sets of echantments: head 1 is +5 holy flaming burst keen/ the other is +5 unholy Flaming burst keen. and is inteligent)

the truth is not none in full to any on the matireal plane. not even Azuril him self can remember everything, but to his memeory he, after he steped into that portall ontop that obilisk, he was traind by a race of humanoids unknown to him, they taught him to kill only those who is "ready to go" or "has run out of time" or anyone who would tip the balance of power beteen good and evil. but unlike his hosts he had not the forsieght to see when a mortals time was "up".

Azuril spent an eternaty leaning to fight against all kinds of foes. he possesed a supernatural like gift to sense the power of his enemy and could determing it's stratagy and weaknases even befor the battle had started, even if such an enemy would prove to little or to much for the little warrior.

when the day came he would be allwoed to littaly spread his wings and fly away form the nest, azurils' host offerd him a gift. his sword and his grear.

sense that day the fallen angel has spent his life as an assign for the gods, and breinger of death to all who had just fell of there mortal coil. for his sword was gifted with the forsieght of it's makers, the power to see into the the grate scheme of things and had the knowladge to get to the that final day.

... well thats the storie. Azuril is a lvl 10 clc/ 10 ftr, he can chanel possitve enrgey like a god clc, has no diety (even with the prolonged contact with Nyrull). he has the death and distruction domian.


.... any sugsetions

ps. forgive the sloppy spelling
Levism84

01-07-04, 01:25 AM
Ah, the good old "balance between good and evil." I tried to make a character like that once, but it ended up not getting off the drawing board. If you would like, you could take some stuff from my own idea. It is more based out of love than creating the ultimate killer.

In the continued fight for survival and dominance on the material plane, there are many secret wars raged in the very societies each force seeks control over. For those of good natures, they seek to educate and nurture the budding and shortlived mortal races. For those of evil natures, they seek only power and control through manipulation and fear.

One such battle set the gears in motion for a strange union between the two opposing forces. One player in this game was a succubus sent to kill a lone angel, seeking peace in the material plane. The other, was the mark for the succubus. The succubus was enthrawled with this divine creature, who needed not any charm spell in her own right. And the divine figure of his fancey was as well intrigued by his soul. Though natural enemies, and sworen to kill one another, they fled from the prying eyes of both sides, and decided to become one union together.

They had a son (maybe Azuril) and their life seemed happy enough, until they were tracked down to where they lived by the evil forces that had demaned the death of the Angel by the hands of the Succubus who had spared her.

(fight fight fight)

The succubus is dead, the angel is dying while sheltering their son from harm, but this attack on his parents- his life- has unearthed a fury from which no one would be spared. The young boy, possesing both divine and unholy power, makes paste of his would be assassins. Without a family or direction, he seeks answers to his heritage and where he shall go.

He follows the trail of some of the demons who killed his family, and is taken to Nyrull who "appologizes" for the conduct of his underlings (who he vanquishes infront of the young boy as a sign of his grief over the loss of his parents) and insists that he begin training with him. He also gives the boy a +5 Unholy Flaming Burst Keen Sword.- this will come into play later

The boy quickly becomes disgusted with Nyrull and leaves to seek out his better half. He finds the people of his mother (I have no idea how, when, or where) and he is like wise given the same offer, and a +5 holy flaming burst keen sword. Feeling out of place, and like he can never fit in because of his demon heritage, he leaves and wanders.

The swords he carries with him are a constant reminder of how he is pulled apart by two different lifes. He joins touches the hilts of the swords together and, as if by some unearthly power of either good or evil, they become one two-sided sword. The sword is magically endowned with intelligence drawn from the very essance of life, and like him, it is pulled between good and evil.

Living a life as a balance between the two forces, he must find for himself where he belongs. Either by fighting both sides, or by finding a middle ground to call his own.

I just wanted to share my idea for a base story because i didnt know if having the pain of loosing the only two people who might understand him could bring out more diversity in the character as opposed to just being a created being.

Hope it helps, if anything to give you an idea for where you can go.

Like Spawn says: "When caught between heaven and hell, make them both suffer."
CaptinKebler

01-07-04, 04:27 PM
i like it, mainly becuse it's short, but still very impressive, and makes more sense then mine.

however, im looking for an angle of death story

:angel: + :devil: = :smirk: ... see what i mean?

he will still be an assasin for the gods, doing there "odd-jobs". and he will hunt down the demons or devil responsible for the death of his parents.

but as for the profession of the the angel of death: there i'm stuck! :confused:

so if any one has any ideas on how to make Azuril the offical Angel of death, i would apreciate there help
Levism84

01-07-04, 06:20 PM
Ever read Incarnations of Immortality? In it, this guy is tired of his life and he is going to shoot himself in the head with a gun. As he is about to pull the trigger a dark and tall figure walks into his room- it is death- but the figure's cloak isnt on all the way. The guy cant stop the pulling of the trigger, so he turns the gun on death- who was comming to collect his soul because it wasnt good or evil so it needed to be judged- and he shoots death.

As it turns out, "Death" is a job that a mortal can have if he kills the current death. Once he has the job he gets certain magical items- such as a cloak of invulnerability that the old death wasnt wearing properly- and he doesnt age.

So the guy, who was going to kill himself, takes on the job of being death until he is killed by someone who he walks in on too early. Hey, to error is human... to really mess things up is divine.

You could play it as a job that he "stumbles upon" or inherites from the old death who just want to retire... for eternity, but only if the new canadate can "take" the role from him. (eh, eh, epic battle between death and an immortal to gain the powers and titile of death)
Lanoitakude

01-07-04, 07:39 PM
To be an Angel of Death...you need to use a scythe. That is the only reall way to reap souls. A sword says "justice", chains(or flails) says "dominating", staff says "wisdom", mace says "good", dagger says "stealthy", and scythe says "death.

I suggest you look in the PHB 3.5 under the description of the cleric spell Magic Weapon ( i think, its the one that makes the floating weapon of your diety). It says the names of each diety's weapon.
Levism84

01-07-04, 08:44 PM
If you ever played Crono Cross, one of the characters you could get was Sprigg (this old lady who carried around a little magic stick) and she could cause her weapon to shrink down to nothing, teleport inside of an enemy, and than regain it's full size (killing the enemy instantly). A weapon doesnt necisarily have to SAY what kind of work you do.

It just might help for fear effect.