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Dev Vim 10-21-03, 01:01 PM

My starwars RPG character Dev Vim has an unusual storie, and I was wondering if anyone had any comments on it. Dev grew up as the only child of a corillian junkyard owner. the Vims have owned it for centuries. they are also a prominent and infamous jedi family. if is Vim tradition that once a vim jedi hits 30, they quit the order and get married. the jedi continued to train vims because they wanted to quell this trend. it never worked. and then came the jedi perge dev grew up an only child who got picked on and beat up in primary school. he rebuilt his dads busted G2 and named it "G3-eK" "geek" dev's first friend. dev found out that his grandpa was a jedi and decided to go to master skywalkers academy, where a nerecian jedi named dannec took him and another learner, churg the ewok, as pupils. after 5 years, dev and churg where left alone on corillia when a darksider killed master dannec and blew up there ship. dev and churg rescued geek from the wreckage, as dannec was far too gone for any help. they went to devs house, then tracked rumers to a pub, where dev met a darksider named terra, she became infatuated with him and later turned on her dark master when dev and churg fought him. dev used his latent force skills in creating things to make a ship, the forcerider. the forcerider is an awsom ship with lots of power and heavy shields, but its made from junk and it breaks down alot. the group then met up with the Tchucthi force adept borath and the idiotic Cather gunslinger Ri-Jirra. later, a cosortium of engeneers came to dev, and asked him to found a technology company (they figured a jedi would be a good judge of character, and engeneers arnt good judges of anything but technology) so dev founded Yavin Systems Design, and made the blueprints for a new republic fighter called the "T-Wing" Dev is gone alot and he has a low wisdom score (9) so he figured that he would do better hiring consultants and doing his designing at his lesure while chasing after the young would-be sith lord Jareth, who wants to use sith alchemy to create a new body for himself. hows this so far?