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memnark901 12-13-06, 06:52 PM

This is my Vermin lords story let me knwo what you all think.Took a few quoets from the 101 evil phrases to help him seem real. On the eve of battle Atomar prepared for the long well deserved bloodshed of the army and his fellow crusaders. A legendary champion of his kingdom he prays to give him strength to defeat his enemies. Sent on a recon mission before the armies clashed Atomar is betrayed by his fellow members of due to sure jealousy and the power he possessed. Fighting valiantly and forsaken by his god atomar fails to fend of the other champions of . Atomar is buried as if we were killed on the recon mission. He was “dead” but could still feel (to a certain degree) and think. He experienced as voice taking to him not as if form out side but inside almost as if it was in his very own head. Stewing Hundreds of years of revenge against his former followers of Her forsakes his fellow man and embraces the Vermin around him. After Years of hearing this alien like voice in his head Atomar finally questions the voice. “I am known as The Patient One and you Atomar shall rise and take revenge on those who betrayed you. Now rise and Do my bidding.” Atomar feels himself Become Possessed by evil and the revenge in his heart burns. As he craws from his grave covered by the insects now his friends. A gravedigger approaches him. Asked the question “Who the hell are you and why are you here” he replies “I am the one who strikes fear into the hearts of the heartless, who damns the dead, who has blackened far purer souls, and who has already decided your grim fate.” Now traveling to take revenge on all those of and possessed by the Patient ones power. He will take revenge on those who betrayed him and any follower of even if he has to animate them first. Coming form a fresh kill of a cleric of he was over heard by other people of the temple as saying “I promise you all a fate that will make veteran soldiers weep in terror. I promise you pain that will tear your mind to shreds. I promise you agony that will snap your bones. I promise you suffering that will leave children sleepless for millennia. And know this—I will not grant you the mercy of death.” Never accualy seen due to the Insects that Infest his body he has become a great criminal and is highly sought after by clerics of , bounty hunter s and Kings alike.