Post/Author/DateTime	Post
boh 09-15-05, 09:37 PM	the orc lord laughed a throaty laugh at the lone warrior defending his viilage. the orcs charged the lone figure. The orc lord stoped for a moment to analyze his opponent. It hit him funny that the figure picked up a bow and nocked an arrow, he was out of range of the longbow the bowstring snapped with a twang. the orc laughed just before the arrow transfixed his skull.
Gastrocnemius 09-16-05, 05:25 AM	short
Johnny001 09-16-05, 01:01 PM	I'd like to know more about the character himself. How did he become a 'deepwood sniper'? What you have down is a good start but you need to expand it.
Ashianyl 09-16-05, 01:15 PM	opinion based on ur short entry = orcs are really cute! :D
McBAMF 09-16-05, 06:30 PM	This isn't a background. A background needs to answer atleast some if not all of the following questions. Who, What, When, Where about your character.
scout989 09-16-05, 07:05 PM	Agreed. Good writing, but not actually a background.
cylepher 09-17-05, 03:22 AM	that tells us what your sniper can do, and how well, and how cool he is. It doesn't really tell why he became that, or how. Background should cover where he came from, why he chose the path he did, and what made him the type of character he or she is. Does he have a vendetta against orcs cuz orc killed his parents? Was his father a great sniper who was killed by being in the wrong place at the wrong time, and he's out for vengence? Stuff like that. :D Cool sniper though.
boh 09-19-05, 08:38 PM	the orcs made a huge mistake when wiping out the one barbarian plains village is they left the babies to die. One baby survived, he was picked up by an old man who raised him as a child. When the kid came of age he was taught the skill of the bow. He was excepted into the brotherhood of the deepwood sniper. he then set out upon his journey for revenge that is the revised "first part"