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Prime32

03-24-08, 07:14 PM
I say we should create/write up our own characters with their zanpakuto, possibly in the form of a contest. Bankai isn't nescessary, but you can still have it. I would like to see what everyone has in mind if they were to make one. The more unique it is, the more points you get. If any of you have trouble, just look here (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38291) or here (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67489).

There were plenty of character concepts and a few builds, so I felt this needed a new thread.
Prime32

03-24-08, 07:16 PM
Character stats, using draxredd's system. A cookie to anyone who works out the name.

Kishihaiiro Mejiri

Shinigami 15/Captain 5
Feats: Alternate release (x2), Leadership, Reiraku hunter, Shrouded reiatsu, Variable release (x2)

Zanpakuto name: Enmu Gunshou - "Mist Commander"

This character is constantly surrounded by mist, which he commands with his zanpakuto. If he needs something done, he usually scouts out the area with remote viewing, then sends his mist soldiers to do it.


Shikai
Command: "Call, Enmu Gunshou!"
Mist swirls around and forms into small humanoid figures
8x 1st-level astral construct (trip) 32pt
Bonus feat (Weapon Focus [Zanpakuto]) 2pt

Variable Release:
Mist swirls around and forms into small humanoid figures with wings
8x 1st-level astral construct (fly) 32pt
Bonus feat (Weapon Focus [Zanpakuto]) 2pt

Alternate release:
Command: "Step across the plains, sail through the waters, open heaven's eye, Enmu Gunshou!"
remote viewing 16pt
Bonus feat (Skill Focus [spot]) 3pt

Constant alternate release:
concealing amorpha 8pt

Bankai
Enmu Kyoushou - "Mist General"
Mist blasts upwards and around the shinigami, taking on the form of an enormous clawed beast
expansion 4pt
7th-level astral construct (rend) 28pt
fusion 32pt

Variable Release:
Mist blasts upwards and around the shinigami, taking on the form of an enormous winged beast
expansion 4pt
7st-level astral construct (improved fly, improved swim) 28pt
fusion 32pt
Prime32

03-24-08, 07:17 PM
Shinigami 19/Kido Corp 1
Feats: Enlightened, Expanded Release (x2), Kido Artist, Sacrifice Release, Spell Penetration

Zanpakuto name: Kessoku Nankan - "Unity Barrier"

This character focuses on defence and elemental kido. His releases let him survive almost any attack, and probably send it back where it came from.

Shikai
Command: "Gleam, Kessoku Nankan"
The shinigami's sword transforms into a shield that glows with all the colours of the rainbow.
energy adaptation 16pt
Bonus feat (Alternate zanpakuto form [heavy shield]) 2pt
Extra damage types (fire, cold, acid, electric) 4pt

Bankai
Kessoku Nankan Gaiheki - "Unity Outer Wall Barrier"
The shield becomes more elaborate, and the shinigami's entire body begins to glow.
energy conversion 28pt
energy retort 12pt
Bonus feat (Alternate zanpakuto form [heavy shield]) 2pt
Extra damage types (fire, cold, acid, electric) 4pt

Sacrifice Release
Kessoku Nankan Naiheki- "Unity Inner Wall Barrier"
As the mighty cero streams towards the shinigami, there is a flash of light from his shield. Spikes sprout from its edges as it enlarges and glows brilliant white before the attack.
Bonus feat (Alternate zanpakuto form [tower shield]) 2pt
+5 reflecting shield 10pt
mental barrier 12pt
X0_Lt_0X

03-25-08, 09:15 PM
I'm still making my release and it should be up soon...

Anyways, does it seem reasonable to get 1 extra Release Point if you take 1d6 points of Damage each round while your Sword is released?

Does 1 extra Release point for a 1d6 spell point cost per attack also seem reasonable?

Also, how should one go about with TWF Zanpakuto?

BTW, I'm using Draxredd system.
Prime32

03-26-08, 02:04 PM
how should one go about with TWF Zanpakuto?

BTW, I'm using Draxredd system.
I would say Bonus feat (Alternate Zanpakuto Form [double axe/dire flail/etc.]) and say they're separate.
X0_Lt_0X

03-26-08, 04:22 PM
I would say Bonus feat (Alternate Zanpakuto Form [double axe/dire flail/etc.]) and say they're separate.

or something like...
Alternate Zanpakuto formX2(Natural Weapon, Claw)&(Katana)?
X0_Lt_0X

04-01-08, 07:30 PM
Note: I'm sorry if i offend anyone, particularly the girls of the forums :weep:
But i couldn't help it :D
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Yofonoo

Shinigami 10/Captain 5/ Kido Corps 5

Feats:Leadership, Kido Artist, EnlightenedX3, Uncanny Dodge, Soul Companion, Reiatsu Burst, Reiraku Hunter, Flash Step, Constant Release, Alternate Release, Variable Release, Expanded Release, Twin Spell, Silent Spell

Flaw: Flat-Chested (details below)

Zanpakuto name: Majikkugursaoasu - "Magic Glass Rod"

Constant Shikai
"A wand made of glass, Majikkugursaoasu reflects all the colors of the rainbow."
Bonus feat Alternate Zanpakuto(Wand[Light Mace]) 2pt
Bonus feat Extend Spell 2pt
Bonus feat Enlarge Spell 2pt
Bonus feat Heighten Spell 2pt
Bonus feat Retributive Spell 2pt
Bonus feat Quicken Spell 2pt
Bonus feat EnlightenedX3 6pts
+1d6 Damage 1pt

Variable Release:
Command: "Blast them, Majikkugursaoasu!!!"
"Majikkugursaoasu appears to be colored orange and flickers, as if it was on fire"
Bonus feat Alternate Zanpakuto(Wand[Light Mace]) 2pt
Bonus feat Maximize 2pt
Bonus feat Sculpt Spell 2pt
Bonus feat Quicken Spell 2pt
Bonus feat Enlarge Spell 2pt
Bonus feat EnlightenedX2 4pts
Bonus feat Blooded 2pts
Bonus feat Arcane Thesis(Hado Number 33, Shot of Red Fire) 2pt
+1d6 Damage 1pt

Alternate Release:
Command: "Seduce him, Majikkugursaoasu!!!"
Attraction(Self only as attraction) 4pt
Telempathic Projection 4pt
Bonus Feat BuxomX3 6pt

Bankai
Kido Sendo Hou, Gurande Majikkugursaoasu - 'Kido Death Cannon, Grand Magic Glass Rod"
"Majikkugursaoasu breaks into shards of glass, And reforms into a giant glass cannon."
Bonus feat Alternate Zanpakuto(Large-Sized Cannon) 2pt
Custom Effect: Powerful Build 3pt
Area of EffectX4(Burst) 12pt
+10 Weapon Enhancement 10pt
+15d6 Damage 15pt
Bonus Feat EnlightendX4 8pt
Bonus Feat BloodedX3 6pt
Bonus Feat Diehard 2pt
Bonus Feat Power Attack 2pt
Bonus Feat Rage 2pt
Custom Effect: Spell Pool Tap(details below) 5pt
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Flaws
Flat-Chested (Female only): The opposite of the Buxom Feat(positive enhancements become negitive, and vice-versa) . Effects are countered by the Buxom Feat.

Custom Effects

Powerful Build: As the Half-Giants Racial Ability

Spell Pool Tap: Whenever Kido Sendo Hou is fired, the user may spend spell points (no more than 50 at a time) to increase damage by spell points spent Times 2. Further more, For every 10 spell points spent, Kido Sendo Hou gets +1 bonus to attack
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Again, Im sorry for anyone I offended with the Flaw I created.
Prime32

04-02-08, 01:07 PM
Heh heh. A kind of maha shoujo style character.


I had a character concept which I am having trouble translating into game mechanics.

Shikai causes this shinigami's zanpakuto to curve around and transform into a large chakram. He can throw it and then control it telekinetically. He can also create duplicates of the chakram and control them.

His shikai's finishing move sends the chakram to trap an opponent within its centre. Duplicates then slide out vertically, pause for a moment, then fly off in different directions, slicing the opponent to pieces.

Despite these abilities, the zanpakuto is a kido-type. Bankai causes it to transform into a very heavy, crystalline shield with razor edges. These can be spun like a chainsaw, but that is not the bankai's main power.

His bankai can change size. To use its true ability, it grows to maximum and its rim starts spinning at great speed. The centre then transforms into translucent energy. Any kidou which passes through this "lens" receives a massive power boost - even Hadou Lv4: Byakurai is powerful enough to kill lieutenants.
X0_Lt_0X

04-02-08, 05:59 PM
I have an idea very similar to your Shikai for one of my characters Bankai
Prime32

04-04-08, 04:54 PM
I just realised after reading X0_Lt_0X's build, that since the bonus feats granted by a zanpakuto release ignore "non-feat-related prerequisites", it is possible to give the Buxom feat to a male character! I'm tempted to stat this (http://www.sgvy.com/) character...
X0_Lt_0X

04-06-08, 01:53 AM
:shocked:

OMG :OMG! !!! Every one run for the Hills! Hide :hides:!!! Disguise your selves :incog:

What ever you do, dont let that thing find you :mrt: !!!

But seriously, don't do something so unholy...
Ryumon_Hozukimaru

04-06-08, 11:50 AM
I don't really enjoy draxredd's system alot, it is very complicated, tried to create a character for the build system but, he never went into detail on how the Shikai and Bankai were constructed. Sure it had to do with one of the skills, but he never said that you couldn't or could contribute into it over time. Plus there was the fact that you can be a level one character with a +4 bonus with weapon attack. :rolleyes:
But the feats, that was a intresting concept. But, there is also another build that I am quite fond of that wasn't finished. It was DonThelonious, you can get certain special abilties or bonus to stats when you activate shikai and bankai. But so many things were left our or just kinda there... which is why, I want to combine the two together! :D
I will post my build afterwards, it is kinda hard to make a Bleach character that isn't modeled after your favorite ones (Byakuya and Ichigo :embarrass). (Though my build will look alittle different than your's, I am adding in a Kido spell-list that Don never finished, along with I have a different way of doing most things.)