Redemption domain -- thoughts? [Archive] - Wizards Community

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JulesCARV

05-11-07, 03:10 PM
What are your thoughts on this domain? Is it already duplicated (thematically) somewhere else? If so, where? If not, any idea on what improvements I could make to it?

The basic idea of it is getting people to change. Currently, the flavor is "good guys" trying to "redeem bad guys," but it could be changed fairly easily to an evil version, with sanctify the wicked being replaced by mindrape or something.

Note: I originally came up with this on the thread NEW mature domains (http://boards1.wizards.com/showpost.php?p=12310922&postcount=43) on the mature boards. I just thought I'd post it here and ask for advice.

Redemption Domain

Granted Power: You gain Subduing Strike or Nonlethal Substitution (your choice) as a bonus feat.

1. Undetectable Alignment
2. Enthrall
3. Lesser Geas
4. Mark of Justice
5. Atonement
6. Geas/Quest
7. Forcecage
8. Sympathy
9. Sanctify the Wicked