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| LunarWolfPrime12-24-07, 08:47 AM | basically since the the plane touched have a touch of the outsiders from other plains i figured that why not there be a variant for just the shifters. the story behind them could be that a lycanthrope native to there became a outsider and mated with a shifter or maybe it they are the last of some lost clan of shifters that has been in hideing there since the purge any who i do not have the stats to make it int to a monster stat block but i am working on the new effects that the plian will have on them 1st draft pls dont flame me just peach pls planetouched shifter as pc outsider (shapechanger, native) medium size movement 30 Dark vision + 2 to balance, jump and climb shifting as listed in the ebbernon campaign setting manual except they shift at will and pick two traits to start favored class ranger LA +4 the reason for my madness is this one it seems like a cool idea and my reason for picking this plain is this look at where alot of the shifters live the eldeen reach there are several manifester zones connected to this plain so I thought why not I hope you all injoy this idea:D |
| LunarWolfPrime12-24-07, 12:54 PM | no comments :eek: is this good or bad |
| Nundahl12-24-07, 05:41 PM | Not intending to offend you here, but it is common folly to expect an answer on a post within the same day (especially in the morning hours), give it some time, if you come back later than 24 hours after you posted and nobody has made a response, give it a bump just to check in, but not every post gets a response unfortunately. That said, as for the template I don't really see a need, but I rarely do for this sort of thing, so take that with a grain of salt. It's definitely overpowered to say the least. You've given them a +4 stat adjustment with no penalties AND essentially (by always shifting) another +2 to TWO abilities of their choice, in addition to the extra powers gained when shifting. Lastly, and this may seem like nitpicking but its really not, proofread. Seriously, any time you're asking for advice and evaluation you are suggesting that someone else go out of their way to look into the submission, and to not offer your best is an insult. I'm not perfect, and I don't ask for perfection, but the spelling errors are atrocious, not to mention you spell the campaign setting incorrectly and didn't feel the need to put enough effort into your post to even capitalize more than 3 letters. I promise that not only will spelling and grammar make your submission look better, it will earn you a stronger response from the boards, I suggest you work this out to be a bit more balanced and try reposting, take some time to evaluate it yourself before you ask others to do so. |
| Nundahl12-24-07, 05:43 PM | You've given them a +4 stat adjustment with no penalties AND essentially (by always shifting) another +2 to TWO abilities of their choice, in addition to the extra powers gained when shifting. And, before someone calls me on it, yes I realize there is a level adjustment, but it hardly warrants a permanent +8 to your stats. |
| LunarWolfPrime12-27-07, 10:27 PM | And, before someone calls me on it, yes I realize there is a level adjustment, but it hardly warrants a permanent +8 to your stats. ok i will drop the stat boost |
| LunarWolfPrime12-31-07, 09:22 AM | Not intending to offend you here, but it is common folly to expect an answer on a post within the same day (especially in the morning hours), give it some time, if you come back later than 24 hours after you posted and nobody has made a response, give it a bump just to check in, but not every post gets a response unfortunately. That said, as for the template I don't really see a need, but I rarely do for this sort of thing, so take that with a grain of salt. It's definitely overpowered to say the least. You've given them a +4 stat adjustment with no penalties AND essentially (by always shifting) another +2 to TWO abilities of their choice, in addition to the extra powers gained when shifting. Lastly, and this may seem like nitpicking but its really not, proofread. Seriously, any time you're asking for advice and evaluation you are suggesting that someone else go out of their way to look into the submission, and to not offer your best is an insult. I'm not perfect, and I don't ask for perfection, but the spelling errors are atrocious, not to mention you spell the campaign setting incorrectly and didn't feel the need to put enough effort into your post to even capitalize more than 3 letters. I promise that not only will spelling and grammar make your submission look better, it will earn you a stronger response from the boards, I suggest you work this out to be a bit more balanced and try reposting, take some time to evaluate it yourself before you ask others to do so. sorry for the spelling errors i have had alot to do and i wrote it in a rush |
| LunarWolfPrime01-17-08, 01:30 PM | :bump: |