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Agun_de_Merak 03-25-05, 06:26 PM	okay this the idea i 've come up with for my players who consit of - a kalashtar psion - a brelish ranger/hexblade of the house deneith (he bear the mark) - a brelish sorcerer/favored soul of house orien - a warforged artificer the is neutral and lawfull neutral the story take place in sharn, in malleon 's gate. member of several dakhani mercenary band are disapearing and hints tend to point that they have been murdered. the problem is that somme of the hobgoblin chief are thinking that the dargun resident are the murderers and from this point tension is growing in malleon's gate. house deneith use both droamite and dargunese troops and want the crime to be solved asap so enter my player. investigation will make them encounter several dargun chief and a medusa who work for daask who will certify the disapearence are not from droamite hand, but she can tell that one of his hireling has disapeared too, in fact during a dragon blood delivery to one the lost hobgoblin. she will propose the player a payment if they can recover the lost dragon blood. the truth will be in fact: 1 the murderer is a green singer druid, he use fey to kill the hobgoblin and hide the corpse (redcap disguised to look like goblin and splinterwaif to hide the corpses) 2 the druid is no more master of himself, he has been changed into a voidmind creature by a trio of minf layer (cyrashk is one of them) who are the true masterminds behind the murders. their goal is to destabilize the dromite in malleon s gate to seize control of district. one of the hobgoblin chief is a mad cultist of the dragon below and try to help his master by setting attack on droamite. he knowingly let one of his men be killed to put the scheme in motion. this is just the base idea, the adventure will feature lot of investigation for the player with a lot of strange hints (thorny brushes, small cloaked figures who do not look like goblin) but also some combat (like a skirmish between droamite and dargun on street, encounter with the fey) what do you think about this ? fell free to make comment.
Agun_de_Merak 03-26-05, 03:23 AM	no comment? i know my english is not too good :D
Emirikol 03-27-05, 04:54 PM	Looks cool. You should break it down a little more into encounter format. You can also ask about it on the Eberron Writers group. They may also have feedback for you. http://www.yahoogroups.com/group/MoHwriters jh
Agun_de_Merak 03-27-05, 07:25 PM	thank you very much :)