A Campaign... a story [Archive] - Wizards Community

A Campaign... a story [Archive] - Wizards Community

Post/Author/DateTime Post
darksyngr
02-20-07, 02:48 AM I am taking a campaign that I am currently in and putting it into story format. I would like feedback or critique if at all possible. Thanks :)

Rockhaven (http://www.angelfire.com/funky/darksyngr/oreo/)
Lord Karsus
02-20-07, 10:15 AM -Asides for some gramatical errors, which you can work out for yourself, everything looks good to me. Not too hard to read, intriguing story, good pace...
JaiaDrottsingr
02-20-07, 10:43 AM I am taking a campaign that I am currently in and putting it into story format. I would like feedback or critique if at all possible. Thanks :)

Rockhaven (http://www.angelfire.com/funky/darksyngr/oreo/)

Haven't seen you here for awhile. I mean in Faerūnian territory, anyways.

Mind I make a suggestion?

Post the story here, in the Once Upon A Time (http://boards1.wizards.com/forumdisplay.php?s=&daysprune=&f=344) forum. Oh, and please feel free to critique other stories, such as Part One of the group story March of Chaos, which is now free to any comments in this thread (http://boards1.wizards.com/showthread.php?t=792257).

Please?
darksyngr
02-20-07, 04:25 PM Good chance this thread will be moved there. So many darn forums I can't keep track of them all, lol.

BTW, grammatical errors is my worst bit. Feel free to point them out.
JaiaDrottsingr
02-20-07, 05:09 PM Good chance this thread will be moved there. So many darn forums I can't keep track of them all, lol.

I mean post the story there. Don't just put a thread with a link on it there. We don't like that.

Post/Author/DateTime	Post
darksyngr 02-20-07, 02:48 AM	I am taking a campaign that I am currently in and putting it into story format. I would like feedback or critique if at all possible. Thanks :) Rockhaven (http://www.angelfire.com/funky/darksyngr/oreo/)
Lord Karsus 02-20-07, 10:15 AM	-Asides for some gramatical errors, which you can work out for yourself, everything looks good to me. Not too hard to read, intriguing story, good pace...
JaiaDrottsingr 02-20-07, 10:43 AM	I am taking a campaign that I am currently in and putting it into story format. I would like feedback or critique if at all possible. Thanks :) Rockhaven (http://www.angelfire.com/funky/darksyngr/oreo/) Haven't seen you here for awhile. I mean in Faerūnian territory, anyways. Mind I make a suggestion? Post the story here, in the Once Upon A Time (http://boards1.wizards.com/forumdisplay.php?s=&daysprune=&f=344) forum. Oh, and please feel free to critique other stories, such as Part One of the group story March of Chaos, which is now free to any comments in this thread (http://boards1.wizards.com/showthread.php?t=792257). Please?
darksyngr 02-20-07, 04:25 PM	Good chance this thread will be moved there. So many darn forums I can't keep track of them all, lol. BTW, grammatical errors is my worst bit. Feel free to point them out.
JaiaDrottsingr 02-20-07, 05:09 PM	Good chance this thread will be moved there. So many darn forums I can't keep track of them all, lol. I mean post the story there. Don't just put a thread with a link on it there. We don't like that.