The Slayer and the Demons.... [Archive] - Wizards Community

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Vampire_Incognito

04-26-06, 12:50 PM
I am writing a new story about Forgotten Realms....I know that i am mess in writing, becoz i am not good in English. I am Afrikaans, from South Africa...Sorry :)

I want to show to you guys a bit of introcution to my story/novel.

The Slayer and the Demons - Part I: The Legend of the Ultimate Power

Narrator:

Past time, 20 years ago……

In this era of chaotic, the Prince of Darkness – the Ultimate Demon, has cause the mass destruction to Forgotten Realms. This land seems lost, would be dissappear forever – but until the mysterious, savior swordsman – the legendary Hellslayer appeared, thus give the faint light of hope to Forgotten Realms. This powerful swordsman was sent from the Heaven to defeat the Prince of Darkness, who was emerged on Forgotten Realms from Hell.

At the heart of the Hell’s Rock, the legendary Hellslayer has defeated the Prince of Darkness, the Ultimate Demon with the help of the Holy Angelic, who was also sent from the Heaven. Forgotten Realms was back, like at the glory days, much thanks to the savior swordsman, the Hellslayer. But the legendary Hellslayer and the Holy Angelic is falling in love, give the birth to two sons, Sasha the eldest and Rukei the youngest.

After the last birth, the Holy Angelic died at the arms of the legendary Hellslayer – because of the forbidden love between them. The Heaven has banned the life of the Holy Angelic, and the Hellslayer has disappeared. Meanwhile, the dreadful Necromancer tried to revive again the Prince of Darkness, back to life, but the ritual will took 20 years to happen.

Present time, 20 years later….

With soon, the Prince of Darkness will be back to life, the destiny of defeating the Ultimate Demon, lies in one of the two sons…….

And thats it....What do you guys think about my story...I will start writing this story next week. Will update this.

Vampire_Incognito ;)
Lord Karsus

04-27-06, 01:29 AM
-Well, just want to point out that this obviously does not stick to the WotC established continuity. How does this all apply to the Forgotten Realms? Why not just establish your own campaign setting to place this storyline in, since it, again, does not seem to mesh with established Realmslore?
Davidw

04-27-06, 08:44 AM
Before you write any more of this, you ought to at least get someone who English speaking to read through it for you.
Vampire_Incognito

05-10-06, 07:18 AM
Sorry, I wanna know how can I get my storyline in Campaign settings. Where do i get and how do this work? I wanna to create my own fantasy world. Thanks for replying...

Vampire_Incognito :D
Lord Karsus

05-10-06, 09:49 AM
Sorry, I wanna know how can I get my storyline in Campaign settings. Where do i get and how do this work? I wanna to create my own fantasy world. Thanks for replying...

Vampire_Incognito :D

-Well, this is not dealing with General FR anymore...

-Well, if you want to create your own fantasy world, then go ahead. You have a computer it seems, so then you also have some kind of writing program, and some kind of drawing program. That's all you really need to get started. So, go get started. And, for help in doing so, there is an entire group of forums on the WotC site that deal with world creation.
JaiaDrottsingr

05-10-06, 05:27 PM
I want to show to you guys a bit of introdcution to my story/novel.

The Slayer and the Demons - Part I: The Legend of the Ultimate Power

Narrator:

Past time, 20 years ago……

In this era of chaotics, the Prince of Darkness – the Ultimate Daemon, hasd caused the mass destruction to the ForgottenRealms. This land seemsed[I] lost, w[I]could behave dissappeared forever – but until the mysterious, savior swordsman, – the legendary Hellslayer appeared, thus give the faint light of hope to the Forgotten Realms. This powerful swordsman savior was sent from the Heavens to defeat the Prince of Darkness, who was emerged on Forgotten Realms Toril from Hell the Abyss.

At the heart of the Hell’s Rock, the legendary Hellslayer has defeated the Prince of Darkness, the Ultimate Da emon with the help of the Holy Angelic, who was also sent from the Heavens. The Forgotten Realms was ere back, like at the glory days, much thanks to the savior swordsman, the Hellslayer. But the legendary Hellslayer and the Holy Angelic is are falling in love, giave the birth to two sons, Sasha the eldest and Rukei the youngest.

After the last birth, the Holy Angelic died at the arms of the legendary Hellslayer – because of the forbidden love between them. The Heavens has banned the life of the Holy Angelic, and the Hellslayer has disappeared. Meanwhile, the dreadful Necromancer tried to revive again the Prince of Darkness, back to life, but the ritual will took 20 years to happen.

Present time, 20 years later….

With soon, the Prince of Darkness will be back to life, the destiny of defeating the Ultimate Daemon, lies in one of the two sons…….

And thats it....What do you guys think about my story...I will start writing this story next week. Will update this.

Vampire_Incognito ;)[/QUOTE]
Helped along by Fen, a fellow writer. VI, post this on the Once Upon A Time forum after the update.