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Korverath

04-17-04, 07:14 PM
Hi everybody,

Our D&D party consists of 7 people and were just changed from 2nd edition AD&D to 3.5 edition Forgotten Realms D&D.

One of our party members writes the whole story of our adventures down in a first-person point of view. If you want to read it you need a little bit of time because the story of our first adventure covers 44 pages.

To read the whole story download it with the link below. The beginning is a bit slow because it is his first story complete in english, but once you read page one it becomes a great story.

http://www.burohemmen.nl/arievanziel/story.html

If you liked it please visit the rest of his site and write some comments about his story in the guestbook.


Here are a few facts about our party.

We are located in Cormy and the first adventure covers Waymoot and Dhedluk.
The seven members of our party are as follows:

Tom Greenbottle (halfling rogue/wizard) He is the I person in the story.
Thamior (Sun-Elf wizard)
Karya (Sun-Elf Fighter)
Aururai (Aasimar Cleric)
Aramil (Moon-Elf Ranger)
Shane (Moon-Elf Monk)
Nathine (Half-Elf Rogue)

Here are the first few paragraphs. If you want to read more use the link above.

At dawn I awake, I can see the light pouring through some clefts. I feel terrible. “Hey there!” calls out a sweet girl’s voice. I hear footsteps slow down and stop. “Yes?” sounds a low, highly sophisticated and controlled voice. The girl continues: “I need strong men to help me find treasure.” “Why do you think we would care about such an insignificant person like you, we are sun-elves, you’re not worth our company.” The man answers at her whining question. Therefore and from the multiple footsteps I assume their must be more than 2 people talking. I wonder what incredible people these sun-elves must be to just reject a sweet girl’s question, without a cause. The girl says: “My name is Nathina, I’m one-fourth sun-elf too, then only derive my other three quarters if you must to.” “Well, my name is Thamior,” answers the male, “But you, you are a disgrace to our race, It’s a deterioration of the blood.” “But, my only purpose is to contribute to the enrichment of the sun-elf race,” answers the girl, which name evidentially is Nathina, with a shaking voice. Thamior must be a mean and apparently very selfish person because he answers again with an even angrier tone than before: “Girl, what are you whining about! The only thing you’re doing is lying to us and wasting our time.” “Nathina, what are you’re intentions and what do you exactly want?” Speaks another voice, much softer and friendlier than Thamior’s. “My only purpose in life is the enrichment of every race,” answers Nathina, much more confident this time. I figure the new voice must be the other sun-elf Thamior spoke about, it sounded much like his, as when he began to speak. Their voices sound almost magical, not really like singing, but very beautiful and precise. Maybe these sun-elves can help me with my own cause. I hope so, finally I hear people of which I think they have great intelligence, perhaps even too great. When I hear footsteps walk away I decide to listen more. “I need some strong men to help and protect me.” Nathina says again. “But tell me, why should we, as full blood moon- and sun-elves help an insignificant only fourth sun-elf like you?” The other sun-elf answers in a beautiful soft but strong voice. A silence follows.
My back starts to hurt. I try to turn around without making a sound that might be noticed by the sun-elves, of what I’ve heard about elves they have very keen ears. I lift my head from the side of the chest I’m in and I try to turn my body. Unfortunately...