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Fend575 02-23-08, 09:05 AM	Ok. hopefully my understanding of the term PEACH is correct and i can get some constructive critism on how to CR / Perfect her... Here is the situation. My players are about to storm the lair of a half fiend annis hag who has conducted a cerimony to harness her blood lineage to Malcanthet herself - transforming herself into a living avatar of the deamon lord to fullfill a couple choice goals (obviously with the favor of Malcanthet herself) So i decided to create one... but i need to nit pick it before i field it. Umbragah – The Avatar of Malcanthet CE medium outsider Modes of Movement: Fly (70foot) perfect, move 30 foot Senses: Darkvision 60ft. Statistics: Initiative: +8 (4 dex. 4 feat) AC: 31 (Dex 4, +7 natural, +10 deflection) FF: 27 T: 24 Hp (14 d8 HD + 84) 140 Base attack +14 Attack: Adamantine Shocking burst Scourge +1 +17/14 (d8+3+d6 electricity 19-20 [d10 electricity burst] Saves: Fort 14 Ref 15 Will 20 Abilities: Str 16, Dex 19, Con 22, Int 24, Wis 28, Cha 31 Skills: (relivant skills only) +25 (Tumble, spot, listen, intimidate) Feats: Combat Expertise, Exotic weapon proficiency, Dark Speech, Improved initiative, Improved Critical (Scourge) Special attacks: Sneak attack (7d6). Poison: DC 23 (10+7hd+6con). Initial d8 Wis / Domination. Seductive gaze – The avatar emits a gaze attack at all times. All those look upon her must succeed a DC 27 will save or suffer -2 on attack rolls, weapon damage rolls, saving throws, skill checks, ability checks for the remainder of that turn. In addition, as a free action during her turn she can attempt to dominate anyone suffering from the affects of her gaze. The victim is entitled to a DC 27 Will save to resist or else is dominated as per the spell dominate person (caster level 14th). If she chooses to dominate another the previous victim is freed from this effect. Special Qualities Immunity (Electricity, Poison) Resistance 10 (Cold, Fire, Acid) Telepathy 100 feet DR 5/Epic. Profane beauty – Avatar of Malchanett gains her charisma modifier as a deflection bonus to AC. In addition, anyone striking the Avatar in Melee must succede a DC 27 Fortitude save or suffer 1 negative level. Every negative level bestowed in such a manner grants the Avatar 5 temporary hitpoints. Im considering branding this a CR 14. Critisism would be definantly apreciated. I havent given her any other items yet besides the scourge. Regards, Fend.
Fend575 02-23-08, 08:02 PM	I did some spelling corrections as i realised i spelt Malcanthets name wrong. But still, i really would apreciate some help fine tuneing her as i have no experiance in makeing my own Monsters =[ So, please dont hesitate to have an opinion. It all helps.. Fend.