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thecrazyDM 10-13-05, 09:24 AM	Earthforged Hit Dice: 1d10+2 Initiative: +1 Speed: 30ft AC:14 (dex+1 natural+3) BAB/Grapple: +1/+3 Attack: +3 d4+2 slam/ +1 ranged Space/Reach: 5by5 Special Attacks: -- Special Qualities: 50% immune critical, DR3 adamant Saves: Fort, Ref , Will Abilities: Str 15, Dex 13, Con 14, Int 11, Wis 9, Cha 10 Skills: spot+4, listen+4, repair+3, craft(any)+4 Feats: Improved Initiative, Power Attack Environment: Rakathi Organization: CR: 1 Treasure: Standard Alignment: Always neutral Advancement: -- Level Adjustment: -- Hello, I thought I liked the warforged but I did'nt have the campaign book, so I made the earthforged instead. It looks like a warforged made with some parts made of rock and stone like its' arms and legs and etc. I'll make the racial traits later. Any comments? :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
thecrazyDM 12-16-05, 05:06 PM	:weep: :weep: :weep: Please respond. :weep: I spent time on this
ieattrollsforbreakfast 12-16-05, 05:33 PM	It's a fine concept, butwe can't really comment until the stats are complete. What type is it? If it is a construct, does it have the living construct subtype or a variant of it? Is it supposed to have a bonus feat? Also, if it is a 1HD creature it should have a class (likely warrior).
Ront Iron-Roar 12-16-05, 05:38 PM	Might want to consider moving this to the Ebberon sections of the Forums?
dok 12-16-05, 06:00 PM	1.) What is this creature's Type? You're using d10's, but I don't know if that's a class level (i.e. "Earthforged Fighter 1") or a racial HD. Constructs, Magical Beasts, and Oozes have d10 Hit Dice, but I don't know if any of those types are appropriate to an "earth-forged" creature... You have an Attack bonus of +3. The Strength modifier is +2, so that last +1 is either coming from a Class level (Fighter 1?) or from its 1 racial HD; since Oozes & Constructs have average BAB, it can't be either of those. Only Magical Beasts have a Good BAB. So either this creature is a Magical Beast, or it's a Construct or Magical Beast with no racial HD and 1 level of fighter. You don't have any saving throws listed, which further confuses things. You have a "repair" skill listed, but no explanation of what it does or how its used. Since "repair" isn't in the SRD, you either need to explain what it does (if it's your creation) or cite the source where you got it from (if it's from Ebberon, for example) You have a bonus to Spot of +4, but a 1 HD creature can only have 4 ranks in a skill, and this creature has a -1 Wisdom modifier, which means its Spot score should be +3 at best. Ditto for Listen. You list two feats, which is one too many for a 1 HD creature. Yet again, I'm forced to assume that this creature has 1 level of fighter, or possibly that it gains a bonus feat at 1st level like humans do, or that it has a racial bonus feat that isn't listed with a (B) to show that its a bonus. So in short, here are my comments: 1.) It's obviously incomplete. No type, no saving throws, no write-up of what constitutes racial skills, or if it has any racial HD. No level adjustment either. 2.) Your write-up is missing too much information. Is this a sample creature with 1 level of Fighter? If so, why does it have Spot and Listen as class skills? If it doesn't have 1 level of fighter, where is it getting its extra +1 to attacks, and why does it have an extra feat?
thecrazyDM 01-05-06, 07:12 AM	i lost my monster manual its a livin construct Ebbron??? Hmmmmm, I modeled this to go into a giant campaign in another plane of existence called Rakathi.
thecrazyDM 02-22-06, 09:32 AM	i lost my monster manual, sorry its a livin construct Ebbron??? Hmmmmm, I modeled this to go into a giant campaign in another plane of existence called Rakathi. I'd say that.. I HATE BABs they are just annoying