Sakorje The wasteland marauders (PEACH) [Archive] - Wizards Community

Sakorje The wasteland marauders (PEACH) [Archive] - Wizards Community

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jakelslang21
06-02-07, 02:59 PM Sakorje

Personality
Sakorje are usually aggressive and violent, starting fights for no reason other than to have fun. They do however, treat their own kin with respect and are not normally going to start a fight with their own unless they both accept the challenge or there is a strong reason supporting it.

Appearance
Sakorje are tall and gaunt, almost skeletal but there are large amounts of muscle on their chest, arms, hips and thighs. Their skin is a dark red with black claws on both their feet and hands. They have two large horns that protrude on the sides of their upper head and two small horns or spikes on their upper forehead as well. Their head is like a rough triangle with their chin the point. Their eyes are deep but bright red in color and are similar to a demon’s in shape. They have a large mouth with razor teeth that can drop to an inhuman length resulting in letting them eat food whole. The neck is broad and connects a bit higher than where the mouth is. Their chest is large and sturdy while their stomach is very thin and flexible. Their shoulders are thin and their upper arm is slightly muscular but their forearm is very muscular. Their upper legs are muscular but the rest of their legs are thin with bony feet.

Sakorje are 6”2 feet tall and weight 215 lbs.

Racial traits
· +4 dexterity, +4 strength, -2 Constitution, -4 Charisma. Sakorje are very tough and agile but because of their fragile frame they are vulnerable and weak and aren’t very social
-Base speed 40ft
-+2 natural armor. Their skin is tough and leathery due to their constant exposure to hot climates.
-Medium size
-+4 racial bonus to jumps and tumbling.
-Natural attack. Sakorje have a claw attack that deals 1d3 damage.
-Dry anatomy. Sakorje need water to survive but it is drastically less than a normal humanoid. They can remain without water for 2 weeks before gaining the effects of dehydration.
-Heat endurance: Sakorje gain the Heat endurance as a bonus feat.
-LA +2

Well this is my first race I put effort in... I just need some critique and an LA.
Lord_Of_The_Abyss
06-02-07, 03:13 PM Very cool idea, i'd play it, seems a lot like an astral stalker mixed with a Xerfilstyx Devil (Fiend Folio, Fiendish Codex II), i'd say at least a +1 or +2 LA, not super overpowered which is good, however it is a little powerful, it seems extremely light, muscle is far heavier than fat....which, from your description they have none of, it would be more like 200-300lbs in order to have a +4 str, also, wouldn't they have a gore attack (just an idea, maybe 1d3 also)? Other than that this is a very interesting race idea that i would like to see where it goes.
jakelslang21
06-02-07, 03:17 PM Cool a quick responce. I gave it an LA +2 for now and made it heavier. I think the gore attack would work but it might make it a little overpowered. Thanks for the positive feedback.

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jakelslang21 06-02-07, 02:59 PM	Sakorje Personality Sakorje are usually aggressive and violent, starting fights for no reason other than to have fun. They do however, treat their own kin with respect and are not normally going to start a fight with their own unless they both accept the challenge or there is a strong reason supporting it. Appearance Sakorje are tall and gaunt, almost skeletal but there are large amounts of muscle on their chest, arms, hips and thighs. Their skin is a dark red with black claws on both their feet and hands. They have two large horns that protrude on the sides of their upper head and two small horns or spikes on their upper forehead as well. Their head is like a rough triangle with their chin the point. Their eyes are deep but bright red in color and are similar to a demon’s in shape. They have a large mouth with razor teeth that can drop to an inhuman length resulting in letting them eat food whole. The neck is broad and connects a bit higher than where the mouth is. Their chest is large and sturdy while their stomach is very thin and flexible. Their shoulders are thin and their upper arm is slightly muscular but their forearm is very muscular. Their upper legs are muscular but the rest of their legs are thin with bony feet. Sakorje are 6”2 feet tall and weight 215 lbs. Racial traits · +4 dexterity, +4 strength, -2 Constitution, -4 Charisma. Sakorje are very tough and agile but because of their fragile frame they are vulnerable and weak and aren’t very social -Base speed 40ft -+2 natural armor. Their skin is tough and leathery due to their constant exposure to hot climates. -Medium size -+4 racial bonus to jumps and tumbling. -Natural attack. Sakorje have a claw attack that deals 1d3 damage. -Dry anatomy. Sakorje need water to survive but it is drastically less than a normal humanoid. They can remain without water for 2 weeks before gaining the effects of dehydration. -Heat endurance: Sakorje gain the Heat endurance as a bonus feat. -LA +2 Well this is my first race I put effort in... I just need some critique and an LA.
Lord_Of_The_Abyss 06-02-07, 03:13 PM	Very cool idea, i'd play it, seems a lot like an astral stalker mixed with a Xerfilstyx Devil (Fiend Folio, Fiendish Codex II), i'd say at least a +1 or +2 LA, not super overpowered which is good, however it is a little powerful, it seems extremely light, muscle is far heavier than fat....which, from your description they have none of, it would be more like 200-300lbs in order to have a +4 str, also, wouldn't they have a gore attack (just an idea, maybe 1d3 also)? Other than that this is a very interesting race idea that i would like to see where it goes.
jakelslang21 06-02-07, 03:17 PM	Cool a quick responce. I gave it an LA +2 for now and made it heavier. I think the gore attack would work but it might make it a little overpowered. Thanks for the positive feedback.