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3 new weapons [Archive] - Wizards Community

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bloodhunter
11-08-05, 08:05 PM I have made 3 new weapons as a DM but not really sure if i should use them in a game or not they r high in Intelligence. is this wrong as a DM or should i post one of the weapons that i have made that is still in the rough. Please let me know. Thanks for all of u're time.

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Thomar_of_Uointer
11-08-05, 08:25 PM Its best to compare new equipment to existing equipment. Go ahead and post all three.
bloodhunter
11-08-05, 08:29 PM Sword Of LIght

Damge 4D12 Crit 20x5

Bounes: For Every Soul Taken By The Sword It Gives A +2 To Intell Temp. It Has a 50 50 Chance Of Taken Over The Holder For 3 Rounds. It Is In A Battle With It Other Have Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed .

Stats on the Sword

STR: 20 +5
DEX: 25 +5
CON: 20 +5
INTELL: 45 +17
WIS: 21 +5
CHA: 33 +11

This Sword has been ( ) over for it's high Intelligence & it's high Chanrisma by many races. Other races look for it to Destroyed it.
It is said that this Sword is told hold a soul of a Great & Mighty Paladin. It was said long ago that this Great & Mighty Paladin was the one that had the power to rise the dead just by the wave of his hand. Still to this day no one knows why this Great & Mighty Paladin could rise the Undead or why he need too. It was said that the Paladin was the last one of it's blood line of lost paladins that had the power to rise the Undead to use for the Church of The Lost Souls. This Church was lost for many years entill one day a a Rouge was lost in the wild of Lost Souls he happen to find a run down church & he spent the night there & he find the Sword as he was looking for Treasure when he Unlocked the Chest he found the Sword it was a sight to see when it lited the whole room up with a very power light. When he looked it over he saw what looked like a stone or a gem of some kind that grow brighter when it was weld by any one, but he was going mad by the vocie in his head that would never stop telling him what to do. He toke it to a mage & in return give him 7 magic spells for it, but before he left out for his next adventure he was told what he had found. After that the Sword was lost again.

Feats:
Cleave
Great Cleave
bloodhunter
11-08-05, 08:32 PM this one is still in the making.

Battle Axe of War

Damage 3D6+6 Crit 20x3

* Fire Damage 5D6

* Ice Damage 5D6

* Lighting Damge 5D6

Ever Sharp

Ever Clean

Speed Adds + 70 To Speed

* Word Command only. Has To Be Spoken. *
BeyondFated
11-08-05, 08:54 PM Ok, for the Sword of Light, I have a few things to say. First, 4d12 is way too powerful, and by throwing in a x5 crit, your just asking for trouble. That has the possibility (albeit a small one) to do well over 200 damage. That’s insane. A sword like that would be a major artifact, and shouldn't be wielded until well into epic level. Also: It Is In A Battle With It Other Have Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed .

I'm sorry, but I can barely make heads or tails of this. Slow down, and run your posts through MS Word to spell check them. That being said, the rest of the of the stats seem ok, although the wielder of the sword should be able to resist being taken over. And how often does the sword try to take control?

Also, what is this sword considered? A longsword, greatsword, shortsword, bastardsword? You can’t forget that.
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Onward to the Axe of War. I think the damage is a bit high, but the low crit sorta balances that out, a bit. However, how does the elemental damage work? Is it like an enchantment on the Axe, or is it some sort of ray attack? And you might want to put some restrictions on the speed bonus, you don't want characters with full plate and eight million pounds of stuff zoomin round the battlefield.

The concepts aren't bad, but they defiantly need tweaking. But I'll leave that to someone much smarter than I.
bloodhunter
11-08-05, 09:03 PM these r just roughs of what the weapons r that is why am asking about them any help on them would be greatly helpit & as far as the Swor of Light goes i missspelled a word It Is In A Battle With It Other Have Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed . it was meant to say:
It Is In A Battle With It Other Half Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed .

the other half of the sword is the same as this one but it is called the Sword of Drakness. they might change in the time to come & i will repost again to see what every one has to say. please any help on these weapons for a new DM that has just made his frist weapons :D thanx
bloodhunter
11-08-05, 09:08 PM As far as the the Battle Axe of War goes it is still under work so not sure what am going to do whith the spells on it just yet. Any help on this one would help out a ton thanx again. :P
UmbraLux
11-08-05, 09:12 PM Sword Of LIght

Damge 4D12 Crit 20x5

Bounes: For Every Soul Taken By The Sword It Gives A +2 To Intell Temp. It Has a 50 50 Chance Of Taken Over The Holder For 3 Rounds. It Is In A Battle With It Other Have Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed .
The damage seems high, how does it compare to the rest of your world? What are the effects of temporary Intelligence bonuses? It's generally a very bad idea for any item to take over it's wielder. While this may be used as a plot device on occasion, don't expect players to want to use a weapon which controls their actions.

Your last sentence above isn't clear.

Stats on the Sword

STR: 20 +5
DEX: 25 +5
CON: 20 +5
INTELL: 45 +17
WIS: 21 +5
CHA: 33 +11
Is the sword a god? With that intelligence and charisma it should be. Also, items don't generally have physical statistics other than hardness and hitpoints. What are the effects of the Str, Dex, and Con above?

This Sword has been ( ) over for it's high Intelligence & it's high Chanrisma by many races. Other races look for it to Destroyed it.
It is said that this Sword is told hold a soul of a Great & Mighty Paladin. It was said long ago that this Great & Mighty Paladin was the one that had the power to rise the dead just by the wave of his hand. Still to this day no one knows why this Great & Mighty Paladin could rise the Undead or why he need too. It was said that the Paladin was the last one of it's blood line of lost paladins that had the power to rise the Undead to use for the Church of The Lost Souls. This Church was lost for many years entill one day a a Rouge was lost in the wild of Lost Souls he happen to find a run down church & he spent the night there & he find the Sword as he was looking for Treasure when he Unlocked the Chest he found the Sword it was a sight to see when it lited the whole room up with a very power light. When he looked it over he saw what looked like a stone or a gem of some kind that grow brighter when it was weld by any one, but he was going mad by the vocie in his head that would never stop telling him what to do. He toke it to a mage & in return give him 7 magic spells for it, but before he left out for his next adventure he was told what he had found. After that the Sword was lost again.
Paragraphs would enhance readability... This may be a pretty good background story, but it's hard to understand.

Feats:
Cleave
Great Cleave

What's the purpose of the sword? Having godlike intelligence it should have it's own desires, goals, and plans.
bloodhunter
11-08-05, 09:20 PM Is the sword a god? With that intelligence and charisma it should be. Also, items don't generally have physical statistics other than hardness and hitpoints. What are the effects of the Str, Dex, and Con above?

not sure yet on the str & the dex & the con but the rest is for the story line for the world that it is in & no it is not a god.

What's the purpose of the sword? Having godlike intelligence it should have it's own desires, goals, and plans.[/QUOTE]

it does have it's own desires & goals as far as plans go no it does not. there is more to the sword than what was posted like i said before these r just roughs.
bloodhunter
11-08-05, 09:28 PM I have updated the sword of light. I have change a few things on it just from the what i have gotten from a every one. Will repost in a few days after i get some more info one it & maybe it will be a good sword for others to use in there later games please keep the info coming & thanx again for all the help. ( update ) the dex & the con a for the HP & hardenss of the weapon the str is still a lil unknow to me right now.

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As far as the battle axe of war goes the spells of Fire, Ice, & Lighting there enchantments that only work once per day & only 1 can be used at a time. Please any help one the Battle Axe would be great as well.
bloodhunter
11-08-05, 09:37 PM Damge 2D12 Crit 20X2

Stats on the Sword

DEX: 25 +5
CON: 20 +5
INTELL: 33 +11
WIS: 21 +5
CHA: 33 +11

new feat add
Unquenchable Flame of Life: You are hardened to the attacks of the undead.

Post/Author/DateTime	Post
bloodhunter 11-08-05, 08:05 PM	I have made 3 new weapons as a DM but not really sure if i should use them in a game or not they r high in Intelligence. is this wrong as a DM or should i post one of the weapons that i have made that is still in the rough. Please let me know. Thanks for all of u're time. :confused: :confused: :confused: :confused:
Thomar_of_Uointer 11-08-05, 08:25 PM	Its best to compare new equipment to existing equipment. Go ahead and post all three.
bloodhunter 11-08-05, 08:29 PM	Sword Of LIght Damge 4D12 Crit 20x5 Bounes: For Every Soul Taken By The Sword It Gives A +2 To Intell Temp. It Has a 50 50 Chance Of Taken Over The Holder For 3 Rounds. It Is In A Battle With It Other Have Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed . Stats on the Sword STR: 20 +5 DEX: 25 +5 CON: 20 +5 INTELL: 45 +17 WIS: 21 +5 CHA: 33 +11 This Sword has been ( ) over for it's high Intelligence & it's high Chanrisma by many races. Other races look for it to Destroyed it. It is said that this Sword is told hold a soul of a Great & Mighty Paladin. It was said long ago that this Great & Mighty Paladin was the one that had the power to rise the dead just by the wave of his hand. Still to this day no one knows why this Great & Mighty Paladin could rise the Undead or why he need too. It was said that the Paladin was the last one of it's blood line of lost paladins that had the power to rise the Undead to use for the Church of The Lost Souls. This Church was lost for many years entill one day a a Rouge was lost in the wild of Lost Souls he happen to find a run down church & he spent the night there & he find the Sword as he was looking for Treasure when he Unlocked the Chest he found the Sword it was a sight to see when it lited the whole room up with a very power light. When he looked it over he saw what looked like a stone or a gem of some kind that grow brighter when it was weld by any one, but he was going mad by the vocie in his head that would never stop telling him what to do. He toke it to a mage & in return give him 7 magic spells for it, but before he left out for his next adventure he was told what he had found. After that the Sword was lost again. Feats: Cleave Great Cleave
bloodhunter 11-08-05, 08:32 PM	this one is still in the making. Battle Axe of War Damage 3D6+6 Crit 20x3 * Fire Damage 5D6 * Ice Damage 5D6 * Lighting Damge 5D6 Ever Sharp Ever Clean Speed Adds + 70 To Speed * Word Command only. Has To Be Spoken. *
BeyondFated 11-08-05, 08:54 PM	Ok, for the Sword of Light, I have a few things to say. First, 4d12 is way too powerful, and by throwing in a x5 crit, your just asking for trouble. That has the possibility (albeit a small one) to do well over 200 damage. That’s insane. A sword like that would be a major artifact, and shouldn't be wielded until well into epic level. Also: It Is In A Battle With It Other Have Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed . I'm sorry, but I can barely make heads or tails of this. Slow down, and run your posts through MS Word to spell check them. That being said, the rest of the of the stats seem ok, although the wielder of the sword should be able to resist being taken over. And how often does the sword try to take control? Also, what is this sword considered? A longsword, greatsword, shortsword, bastardsword? You can’t forget that. ___ Onward to the Axe of War. I think the damage is a bit high, but the low crit sorta balances that out, a bit. However, how does the elemental damage work? Is it like an enchantment on the Axe, or is it some sort of ray attack? And you might want to put some restrictions on the speed bonus, you don't want characters with full plate and eight million pounds of stuff zoomin round the battlefield. The concepts aren't bad, but they defiantly need tweaking. But I'll leave that to someone much smarter than I.
bloodhunter 11-08-05, 09:03 PM	these r just roughs of what the weapons r that is why am asking about them any help on them would be greatly helpit & as far as the Swor of Light goes i missspelled a word It Is In A Battle With It Other Have Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed . it was meant to say: It Is In A Battle With It Other Half Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed . the other half of the sword is the same as this one but it is called the Sword of Drakness. they might change in the time to come & i will repost again to see what every one has to say. please any help on these weapons for a new DM that has just made his frist weapons :D thanx
bloodhunter 11-08-05, 09:08 PM	As far as the the Battle Axe of War goes it is still under work so not sure what am going to do whith the spells on it just yet. Any help on this one would help out a ton thanx again. :P
UmbraLux 11-08-05, 09:12 PM	Sword Of LIght Damge 4D12 Crit 20x5 Bounes: For Every Soul Taken By The Sword It Gives A +2 To Intell Temp. It Has a 50 50 Chance Of Taken Over The Holder For 3 Rounds. It Is In A Battle With It Other Have Entill The Other One Is Marged With It Or Destroyed . The damage seems high, how does it compare to the rest of your world? What are the effects of temporary Intelligence bonuses? It's generally a very bad idea for any item to take over it's wielder. While this may be used as a plot device on occasion, don't expect players to want to use a weapon which controls their actions. Your last sentence above isn't clear. Stats on the Sword STR: 20 +5 DEX: 25 +5 CON: 20 +5 INTELL: 45 +17 WIS: 21 +5 CHA: 33 +11 Is the sword a god? With that intelligence and charisma it should be. Also, items don't generally have physical statistics other than hardness and hitpoints. What are the effects of the Str, Dex, and Con above? This Sword has been ( ) over for it's high Intelligence & it's high Chanrisma by many races. Other races look for it to Destroyed it. It is said that this Sword is told hold a soul of a Great & Mighty Paladin. It was said long ago that this Great & Mighty Paladin was the one that had the power to rise the dead just by the wave of his hand. Still to this day no one knows why this Great & Mighty Paladin could rise the Undead or why he need too. It was said that the Paladin was the last one of it's blood line of lost paladins that had the power to rise the Undead to use for the Church of The Lost Souls. This Church was lost for many years entill one day a a Rouge was lost in the wild of Lost Souls he happen to find a run down church & he spent the night there & he find the Sword as he was looking for Treasure when he Unlocked the Chest he found the Sword it was a sight to see when it lited the whole room up with a very power light. When he looked it over he saw what looked like a stone or a gem of some kind that grow brighter when it was weld by any one, but he was going mad by the vocie in his head that would never stop telling him what to do. He toke it to a mage & in return give him 7 magic spells for it, but before he left out for his next adventure he was told what he had found. After that the Sword was lost again. Paragraphs would enhance readability... This may be a pretty good background story, but it's hard to understand. Feats: Cleave Great Cleave What's the purpose of the sword? Having godlike intelligence it should have it's own desires, goals, and plans.
bloodhunter 11-08-05, 09:20 PM	Is the sword a god? With that intelligence and charisma it should be. Also, items don't generally have physical statistics other than hardness and hitpoints. What are the effects of the Str, Dex, and Con above? not sure yet on the str & the dex & the con but the rest is for the story line for the world that it is in & no it is not a god. What's the purpose of the sword? Having godlike intelligence it should have it's own desires, goals, and plans.[/QUOTE] it does have it's own desires & goals as far as plans go no it does not. there is more to the sword than what was posted like i said before these r just roughs.
bloodhunter 11-08-05, 09:28 PM	I have updated the sword of light. I have change a few things on it just from the what i have gotten from a every one. Will repost in a few days after i get some more info one it & maybe it will be a good sword for others to use in there later games please keep the info coming & thanx again for all the help. ( update ) the dex & the con a for the HP & hardenss of the weapon the str is still a lil unknow to me right now. ----- As far as the battle axe of war goes the spells of Fire, Ice, & Lighting there enchantments that only work once per day & only 1 can be used at a time. Please any help one the Battle Axe would be great as well.
bloodhunter 11-08-05, 09:37 PM	Damge 2D12 Crit 20X2 Stats on the Sword DEX: 25 +5 CON: 20 +5 INTELL: 33 +11 WIS: 21 +5 CHA: 33 +11 new feat add Unquenchable Flame of Life: You are hardened to the attacks of the undead.