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metallicakid430

10-10-04, 11:30 PM
I was hoping for somone to proofread this char I just made. I'm fairly new and often forget things.



Name: Kerik
Alignment: Neutral evil
Gender: Male
Race: Half-elf
Height: 5' 5"
Weight: 170 lbs

Appeariance:
He has long White Hair down to shoulder blades
Has his lobes pierced onece on his left ear and twice on his

right. His left cartalage is also pierced. He wears black gloves

and a black cloak, concealing most of his body and his weapons.

His hair pools in the usually down hood of the cloak.

Strength: 12 (+1)
Dexterity: 15 (+2)
Constitution: 12 (+1)
Intelligence: 13 (+1)
Wisdom: 12 (+1)
Charisma: 9 (-1)

Hit Points: 2d6+2 + 1d10+1 (19)
Armor Class: 12 (+2 Dex)
Speed: 30 ft.
Initiative: +6 (+2 Dex, +4 Improved initiative)
CR: 3
Total Gear Value: 2,500 gp

Gear:
Long Sword
Dagger
Rapier
Light Crossbow
50 Bolts
Black CloakThunder Stone
Black Leather Armor

Classes:
Rogue 2
Ranger 1


Saving Throws:
Fortitude: +3 (+2 Base, +1 Con)
Reflex: +5 (+3 Base, +2 Dex)
Will: +1 (+0 Base, +1 Wis)

Attack Bonuses:
Melee: +3 (+2 Base, +1 Str)
Ranged: +4 (+2 Base, +2 Dex)

Languages:
Abyssal
Common
Elven


Skills Points:
Rogue 45
Ranger 5


Skills:
Balance +7 (+5 Rank, +2 Dex)
Craft +5 (+4 Rank, +1 Int)
Diplomacy +4 (+5 Rank, -1 Cha)
Disable device +6 (+5 Rank, +1 Int)
Disguise +4 (+5 Rank, -1 Cha)
Gather information +3 (+4 Rank, -1 Cha)
Hide +6 (+4 Rank, +2 Dex)
Listen +2 (+1 Wis, +1 Racial)
Move silently +2 (+2 Dex)
Perform +4 (+5 Rank, -1 Cha)
Profession +6 (+5 Rank, +1 Wis)
Search +3 (+1 Rank, +1 Int, +1 Racial)
Spot +2 (+1 Wis, +1 Racial)
Tumble +7 (+5 Rank, +2 Dex)
Use rope +4 (+2 Rank, +2 Dex)


Feats:
Favord Evemy: Undead
Improved initiative
Track
Weapon finesse (dagger)
Sneak Attack (+2d6)
Evasion
Uncanny Dodge

Thanks in advance
Kudora Kyoji

10-10-04, 11:34 PM
Uh, first, what class is this guy?
metallicakid430

10-10-04, 11:35 PM
Uh, first, what class is this guy?
It says...
Kudora Kyoji

10-10-04, 11:37 PM
Oh, missed it, sorry. Well, skimmed over it looks good, gimme a few minutes for a thorough check.
metallicakid430

10-10-04, 11:40 PM
Oh, missed it, sorry. Well, skimmed over it looks good, gimme a few minutes for a thorough check.
Thanks bro, hey wanna do an online tabletop game with me?
Kudora Kyoji

10-10-04, 11:46 PM
Looks spot on. If this is the first character you've made, it's pretty good. One thing though. A couple things you've listed as feats are actually class features. Other that that, good job.

About that online game. I'm already DMing a game IRL right now, and it takes up most of my gaming time, so I must politely decline.
metallicakid430

10-10-04, 11:47 PM
Looks spot on. If this is the first character you've made, it's pretty good. One thing though. A couple things you've listed as feats are actually class features. Other that that, good job.

About that online game. I'm already DMing a game IRL right now, and it takes up most of my gaming time, so I must politely decline.
I was tlaking more of a whenever game like, jsut whenever you ahve time and stuff, just for fun.
eudas

10-11-04, 10:13 AM
n/t

eudas
Steelborn86

10-11-04, 10:19 AM
Well there is a mistake.

If he is only Rogue/2 then he should only have 1d6 sneak attack.


Also I hope he isn't going to try to fool anyone to believe he is not evil. :)
green_yawgmoth

10-11-04, 10:44 AM
Yeah, one thing I'd change, if you have the option, is swap the str and cha scores. Bluff/diplomacy/intimidate are probably going to be pretty important skills, and your SA will more than make up for the low str mod. Besides, you can buy it up to a 10 next level. Possibly move some/all of your perform ranks to bluff. The ability to lie is much more useful to an evil rogue than the ability to dance. ;)


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symons

10-11-04, 11:18 AM
1d8 for a Ranger not a 1d10.
striderII

10-11-04, 03:31 PM
If you're playing 3.5, then yes, the Ranger has d8 for hit points. Otherwise, it's a d10.

The problem I found was with the AC. If you have Leather Armor, then your AC should be 14, not 12 (+2 Armor Bonus from the leather, and +2 Dex mod).

Personally, I'm wondering why you're carrying around a rapier and a long sword (trying to picture carrying both, and not really making that happen). Care to explain?

strider
eudas

10-11-04, 04:06 PM
rapier on hip, longsword over back?

eudas
metallicakid430

10-11-04, 07:26 PM
If you're playing 3.5, then yes, the Ranger has d8 for hit points. Otherwise, it's a d10.

The problem I found was with the AC. If you have Leather Armor, then your AC should be 14, not 12 (+2 Armor Bonus from the leather, and +2 Dex mod).

Personally, I'm wondering why you're carrying around a rapier and a long sword (trying to picture carrying both, and not really making that happen). Care to explain?

strider

Yo I made some changes and to the guy who said the 1d6 sneak attack, no it is 2d6 its in my book.

Name: Kerik
Alignment: Neutral evil
Gender: Male
Race: Half-elf
Height: 5' 5"
Weight: 170 lbs

Appeariance:
Kerik has long White Hair down to shoulder blades.
He has his lobes pierced onece on his left ear and twice on his

right. His left cartalage is also pierced. He wears black gloves

and Black Leather armor. His hair usually sinks all the way down.

He has his Rapier on his hip and a crossbow on him back, his

bolts on his other hip. He wears a black trench coat most of the

time.

Strength: 12 (+1)
Dexterity: 15 (+2)
Constitution: 12 (+1)
Intelligence: 13 (+1)
Wisdom: 12 (+1)
Charisma: 11 (+1)

Hit Points: 2d6+2 + 1d8+1 (17)
Armor Class: 14 (+2 Dex)
Speed: 30 ft.
Initiative: +6 (+2 Dex, +4 Improved initiative)
CR: 3
Total Gear Value: 2,500 gp

Gear:
Dagger (On side of right leg)
Rapier (On hip)
Light Crossbow (On back)
50 Bolts
balck trench Coat
Thunder Stone
Black Leather Armor

Classes:
Rogue 2
Ranger 1


Saving Throws:
Fortitude: +3 (+2 Base, +1 Con)
Reflex: +5 (+3 Base, +2 Dex)
Will: +1 (+0 Base, +1 Wis)

Attack Bonuses:
Melee: +3 (+2 Base, +1 Str)
Ranged: +4 (+2 Base, +2 Dex)

Languages:
Abyssal
Common
Elven


Skills Points:
Rogue 45
Ranger 5


Skills:
Balance +7 (+5 Rank, +2 Dex)
Craft +5 (+4 Rank, +1 Int)
Diplomacy +4 (+5 Rank, -1 Cha)
Disable device +6 (+5 Rank, +1 Int)
Disguise +4 (+5 Rank, -1 Cha)
Gather information +3 (+4 Rank, -1 Cha)
Hide +6 (+4 Rank, +2 Dex)
Listen +2 (+1 Wis, +1 Racial)
Move silently +2 (+2 Dex)
Perform +4 (+5 Rank, -1 Cha)
Profession +6 (+5 Rank, +1 Wis)
Search +3 (+1 Rank, +1 Int, +1 Racial)
Spot +2 (+1 Wis, +1 Racial)
Tumble +7 (+5 Rank, +2 Dex)
Use rope +4 (+2 Rank, +2 Dex)


Feats:
Favord Evemy: Undead
Improved initiative
Track

Class Features:
Weapon finesse (dagger)
Sneak Attack (+2d6)
Evasion
Uncanny Dodge
warok

10-11-04, 08:57 PM
i'm not sure what version you are playingbut rogue 2 definetly only gets +1d6 SA dice (its at rogue 3 that you get the next dice)

additionally how did you get uncanny dodge, thats available at rogue 4

if you are playing v3.5, and mostly everthing applys to 3.0 here is what you get with a rogue 2 /ranger 1

rogue grants
Sneak attack +1d6, trapfinding
Evasion

ranger grants
1st favored enemy, Track, wild empathy (in 3.0 i believe you would get TWF as well, in 3.5 this is bumped to ranger 2)

your feats and class features section should look like this

Feats:
Improved initiative
Weapon finesse (in v3.5 it applys to all light weapons, rapiers, and spiked chains, and whips)
Track (bonus feat)

Class Features:
Sneak Attack (+1d6)
Evasion
Favored Evemy: Undead

your saves are a little messed up as well, for the base save i note the source
Fortitude: +3 (+0 rogue Base, +2 ranger base, +1 Con)
Reflex: +7 (+3 rogue Base, +2 ranger base, +2 Dex)
Will: +1 (+0 rogue Base +0 ranger base, +1 Wis)

your cha score is 11 which has a bonus of +0

if the game is indeed 3.5 then ranger gets 6+ int skill points, so thats 7 for you

and your the ability score mods in your skills don't match your stats, namely gather info and perform

other than those mix-ups looks good

everything i got info from is here (http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=d20/article/srd35)