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dz64 04-08-06, 11:22 AM	i maded this world long ago, take a look long ago in a world covered in forest so high a thick no one has every see the bottom. some trees are 1,000,000s of miles long. creatures called kawany lived high in the tree tops the creatures had 4 legs like a centar and 4 arms like the snake people of kamigawa. the tree are more spaced out at the top section(high live zone), so with 4 arms and legs they can jump and grap easier. then there is the 2nd section(mid live zone) where elfs and centars live. after that there is 3th section(mid live zone) where gaint worms live. next we have the 4th section(rain zone) this is as far down as most rain get here minigets live small elf with vines that suck in water on there head.now we come to the 5th section (deep zone) 700,000 miles down here fire mad humans and minitoright live, minitoright are similir to minigets only there vines are much larger because hardly any rain every get down this far. 6th section (dead zone) 12.o0o,000, down here are tree spirit becuse they take no water to live. 7th section 200,000,o0o (floor zone) only avatar can live down here the only light is comes from magic spells. after long serching i have found a tunnel to the core new area, 8th floor(the core) here more avatars and the godess of the forest in here there is heat, all trees roots end here and a tunnel goes up every tree so anyone can go any where from the core. and there we go my planet say anything you like about
Rny2 04-08-06, 12:58 PM	long ago in a world covered in forest so high a thick no one has every see the bottom. How long ago is this? beyond the present order of chronology, or merely beyond "Reckoning?" Where would this world be? Was it far away or inconsequential in the past, and only now become important? some trees are millions of miles long. would these trees still have the proportions of mundone ones? Are they shaped like any specific one? is there a variety? Are these trees always erect? Have any fallen, or are they immortal? Do some grow sideways, or grow down? creatures called kawany lived high in the tree tops the creatures had 4 legs like a centar and 4 arms like the snake people of kamigawa. the tree are more spaced out at the top section(high live zone), so with 4 arms and legs they can jump and grap easier. where did these kawany come from? Did they develope from ecologies from above or below? Do they have any special relationship with the sky? How do they view the lower races on the trees? Why is it that they had eight limbs, then apparently lost them and gained them back? Was this a racial curse, ala Kaiserric Breaking, or shifting of the genes? Maybe the original, pure Kawany interbred with lesser elves and centars, diluting the original blood? Then how would the Kawany-elf hybrids regain the blessing of the eight limbs? then there is the 2nd section(mid live zone) where elfs and centars live. How much contact and trade is conducted between the races and livezones? Are various zone-dwellers xenophobic, and work to keep certain races from climbing too far up or down? Could there be a wall or shield-like structure to separate the zones? Is this segregation crucial to the defense of certain, weaker races, or is it just a cultural thing. What are centars? six-limbed, a cross between the elf and the Kawany, perhaps? the lost ones who corrupted both lines and are thus banished from their respective societies? or are they incorporated within, used as slaves and base servants? after that there is 3th section(mid live zone) where gaint worms live. Once again, what contains the worms? Barriers, spiritual, cultural, physical? Did something in the past imbue a racial deterrence against a race interfering with one another across zones, preserving each zone of races as a seperate experiment? Would these layering rules be consistent across this world, or could they be switch around? next we have the 4th section(rain zone) this is as far down as most rain get here minigets live small elf with vines that suck in water on there head. though they resemble the elves, are the miniget(s?) actually related to those that dwell above? If not, did each of the zone-specific races develop independently? Are these minigets actively in pursuit of water, or do they passively absorb water from some limb or leaf? Is this activity parasitic or mutualistic? If all these minigets were to congregate on a single tree, could the tree be drained dry? now we come to the 5th section (deep zone) 700,000 miles down here fire mad humans and minitoright live, minitoright are similir to minigets only there vines are much larger because hardly any rain every get down this far. Are the humans naturally insane, or is it driven by an enviromental stimulus? Could it be the lack of water, or constant exposure to fire? What would the firemad humans burn? does the use of combustion feature more prominently in their society than usual? Mandatory cremation? 7th section (dead zone) 12.o0o,000, down here are tree spirit becuse they take no water to live. 8th section 200,000,o0o (floor zone) only avatar can live down here the only light is comes from magic spells. as there are tree spirits here, do water and fire spirits exist in the upper zones? is there antagonism between these spirits, providing for unique physical laws of interaction between these three elements? Though they can live here, do avatar actually seek the floor? does it hold some great magical outlit, or mana source? Looks good overall
dz64 04-08-06, 07:37 PM	How long ago is this? beyond the present order of chronology, or merely beyond "Reckoning?" Where would this world be? Was it far away or inconsequential in the past, and only now become important? this 70,000 some where in the spider system (i system next to the star wars ones would these trees still have the proportions of mundone ones? Are they shaped like any specific one? is there a variety? Are these trees always erect? Have any fallen, or are they immortal? Do some grow sideways, or grow down? the tree are all the but they change color from dark blown up to light green. the trees can fall but in most places the trees are so thick that they don't go any where. where did these kawany come from? Did they develope from ecologies from above or below? Do they have any special relationship with the sky? How do they view the lower races on the trees? Why is it that they had eight limbs, then apparently lost them and gained them back? Was this a racial curse, ala Kaiserric Breaking, or shifting of the genes? Maybe the original, pure Kawany interbred with lesser elves and centars, diluting the original blood? Then how would the Kawany-elf hybrids regain the blessing of the eight limbs? well when live started only nothing lived there but a few out casted centars from the 2nd section. these centars fall a lot so they grow 2 more arms like how fish in the deeper ocrean in are world get biger eyes to get more light. and no there are no hybird. How much contact and trade is conducted between the races and livezones? Are various zone-dwellers xenophobic, and work to keep certain races from climbing too far up or down? Could there be a wall or shield-like structure to separate the zones? Is this segregation crucial to the defense of certain, weaker races, or is it just a cultural thing. the top two layer trade and live with in each others zone like the top is china and the 2nd layer is the U.S.A. we trade and live in each other contry but we look diferent. What are centars? six-limbed, a cross between the elf and the Kawany, perhaps? the lost ones who corrupted both lines and are thus banished from their respective societies? or are they incorporated within, used as slaves and base servants? a centaur is a hourse-man and they are respeted highly all sevants are elfs girls(no affens to any girls). but many elf girls aren't even servants. Once again, what contains the worms? Barriers, spiritual, cultural, physical? Did something in the past imbue a racial deterrence against a race interfering with one another across zones, preserving each zone of races as a seperate experiment? Would these layering rules be consistent across this world, or could they be switch around? the worms live down here because the trees are close to each other so worm don't have to jump( they can't jump because there so fat) they just stick to the tree or dig in to it to wait for a falling elf ,centaur or kawany. though they resemble the elves, are the miniget(s?) actually related to those that dwell above? If not, did each of the zone-specific races develop independently? Are these minigets actively in pursuit of water, or do they passively absorb water from some limb or leaf? Is this activity parasitic or mutualistic? If all these minigets were to congregate on a single tree, could the tree be drained dry? there race started when a bunch of falling elfs fell past the worm and on to this layer most grabed a tree a few more fell to start the minitoright race. so this race of elf quickly build plat forms from wood but they fell ill with vianitapila but they didn't die soon they had babies with vianitapila only it was weeker there body turned it in to viens that grow from there head. the viens skucked water from the air not the trees. this can spin like a helicopter to stop them from falling. Are the humans naturally insane, or is it driven by an enviromental stimulus? Could it be the lack of water, or constant exposure to fire? What would the firemad humans burn? does the use of combustion feature more prominently in their society than usual? Mandatory cremation? insane do to low very low water they forest magic and peace turn to fire and rage. they attack the minitoright race a lot from all the rage. as there are tree spirits here, do water and fire spirits exist in the upper zones? is there antagonism between these spirits, providing for unique physical laws of interaction between these three elements? Though they can live here, do avatar actually seek the floor? does it hold some great magical outlit, or mana source? tree spirits are the only spirit beside the avatars there is no water spirit or fire ones just tree, avatar seek the ground because there is a tunnel that goes to the core where heat and energy is easy to find.
Rny2 04-08-06, 09:25 PM	I know I really should let someone else ask some questions, but what the heck. this 70,000 some where in the spider system (i system next to the star wars ones hmm, so what system would the Nameless World be of? Are the systems catergorized by letters (i, p, k, etc) or Roman Numerals (I, VI, X, etc) the tree are all the but they change color from dark blown up to light green. the trees can fall but in most places the trees are so thick that they don't go any where. If the trees were to be this dense, why would the various tree-world dwelling races have to jump from tree to tree? Could they not simply fall on a slant/arc, knowing they'll eventually land on another tree within so many metres? well when live started only nothing lived there but a few out casted centars from the 2nd section. these centars fall a lot so they grow 2 more arms like how fish in the deeper ocrean in are world get biger eyes to get more light. and no there are no hybird. Why would these centars be 'casted out'? is this a practice still used amongst the centars, or is it defunct/taboo because of the presence of the Kawany? How would extra arms aid the proto-Kawani? More Limbs would easily get in the way of jumping/catching oneself, rather than augmentation of present body parts like the deep fish, so what prevented the proto-Kawani from simply developing longer or stronger arms and legs? the top two layer trade and live with in each others zone like the top is china and the 2nd layer is the U.S.A. we trade and live in each other contry but we look diferent. We 'look different,' eh? Is this merely cosmetic, in which case would be almost not at all, or do the two societies differ drastically on the basic psychological level as between China and the United States? a centaur is a hourse-man and they are respeted highly all sevants are elfs girls(no affens to any girls). but many elf girls aren't even servants. hmm, so what exactly are hourses, then? Carnivorous equids with clawed hooves dashing between trees? :) Is there an aversion in centar society to using males servants? to using members of their own race? Would slavery exist, then, as a higher form of service above mere 'servitude?' this race of elf quickly build plat forms from wood but they fell ill with vianitapila but they didn't die soon they had babies with vianitapila only it was weeker there body turned it in to viens that grow from there head. the viens skucked water from the air not the trees. this can spin like a helicopter to stop them from falling. quickly, does this mean after they had landed or as they were falling the several thousand miles down to this zone? What is vianitapila? fungi, shapeshifters, spirits? tree spirits are the only spirit beside the avatars there is no water spirit or fire ones just tree, avatar seek the ground because there is a tunnel that goes to the core where heat and energy is easy to find. Has there always been this singular elemental spirit? Did there use to be other spirits, but left or were exterminated by the tree spirits? Would this correspond with the mythic growing of the trees? Would the core-tunnel be found pock-marked across the globe, so that avatars would uniformly seek the ground rather than concentrating on a specific epicentre? What would be the size of these core-tunnels, so that they could be seen under all the roots and trash? Do they open and close, or are they stabile, creating a limit to where the trees can grow?
dz64 04-09-06, 10:43 PM	hmm, so what system would the Nameless World be of? Are the systems catergorized by letters (i, p, k, etc) or Roman Numerals (I, VI, X, etc) i dont know its just some where in there. If the trees were to be this dense, why would the various tree-world dwelling races have to jump from tree to tree? Could they not simply fall on a slant/arc, knowing they'll eventually land on another tree within so many metres? well higher up on the first 2 level you need jump, but 6 other level hold the tree up, it will slant a bit, then vines would over grow it. Why would these centars be 'casted out'? is this a practice still used amongst the centars, or is it defunct/taboo because of the presence of the Kawany? the centars did crime so they were out casted. and they are the kawany, kawany were the out casts. How would extra arms aid the proto-Kawani? More Limbs would easily get in the way of jumping/catching oneself, rather than augmentation of present body parts like the deep fish, so what prevented the proto-Kawani from simply developing longer or stronger arms and legs? the arms help them grap vines, which they then can swing to the next tree. hmm, so what exactly are hourses, then? Carnivorous equids with clawed hooves dashing between trees? Is there an aversion in centar society to using males servants? to using members of their own race? Would slavery exist, then, as a higher form of service above mere 'servitude?' some thing like that. no slaves just paid female elfs. quickly, does this mean after they had landed or as they were falling the several thousand miles down to this zone? What is vianitapila? fungi, shapeshifters, spirits? after they landed. a illness. Has there always been this singular elemental spirit? Did there use to be other spirits, but left or were exterminated by the tree spirits? Would this correspond with the mythic growing of the trees? Would the core-tunnel be found pock-marked across the globe, so that avatars would uniformly seek the ground rather than concentrating on a specific epicentre? What would be the size of these core-tunnels, so that they could be seen under all the roots and trash? Do they open and close, or are they stabile, creating a limit to where the trees can grow? there had always been this singular elemental. the tunnel is in a weird location, the size of the tunnal is just enought so 5 avatars can fit in it. the tunnals are fixed so tree can grow there.
the_one_true_shea 04-15-06, 08:48 PM	64 eh? dz64.. now that is a neat name. I come up with Deezeesixtyfour? Or is it, like, star warsy like a droid? SO we got centaurs with the name Kawamy..no Kawany. Yes. Nifty. Trees. Lots and Lost of trees. I like were your going with this. Sounds like you have a real mythic understanding of what your working on here. Tell me a little bit more about how you want to use it?
dz64 04-16-06, 03:22 PM	well i made this world up for school, we need to find a subjet to right poems about, and i like some of the short poems in kamigawa on some of the card so i made up a weird world the would be perfect for righting poems about :) and once im done with the story im righting i might make a story about some one traveling from the top to the bottom :)
the_one_true_shea 04-19-06, 10:29 PM	Can you see this jungle world including strange gecko-like humanoids as well? Perhaps, flightless bird people? oooooh oooh what if the tree world was on the inside of the world?
dz64 04-21-06, 10:25 PM	i like the flightless birds and geckos stuff but this world is huge it's twice the size of earth, and more mass makes higher gravity so i'm not ever able to make it big. it's gravity is the same as earths though do to some powerfull enchantments
Rny2 04-22-06, 08:52 AM	would, then, if the forest world be the core of the world, the tunnels be cracks in the underdarks? Carrying through to the surface? Why would the elementals seek to be away from their natural enviroment (the forests) and come into a much more hostile enviroment, especially where there's competition?
dz64 04-22-06, 01:14 PM	i already told you in the secetion about the core. well i'll tell you again these avatars serve the forest goddess and it's warm down there
Rny2 04-22-06, 06:58 PM	well, how would that work if we were to take the forest world as a core itself?
dz64 04-22-06, 08:24 PM	well we aren't
Rny2 04-23-06, 09:29 AM	certainly, its your world, I was simply responding to shea's contention
dz64 04-26-06, 07:57 PM	oh
Undernetter 04-27-06, 10:15 AM	lotsa quotes
Rny2 04-27-06, 05:17 PM	lol, he hit me with a lot of information at first, so I couldn't resist.
the_one_true_shea 04-28-06, 02:06 AM	Hey dz, ya know we want to put the forest world into the big world were all working on right? One big happy world where everything mixes intogether. Its a one world creation project "codename: suicide soda" ;) Ya know - mixing coke, pepsie, mt dew, dr pepper, and sprite (:r::u::g::b::w:) eh? Where do you see this world you have created mixing in with the rest of the world we have here? Are you thinking: On one of the continents somewhere? on the inside of things? the whole world itself, or maybe in as another planet? The moon? ... A forest moon? That would actually be entierly doable, a forest moon? No, perhaps.. an outer plane? I mean considering some of the other elements you have to link up with, wher do you thing this thread ties in? To the rest of the world?
dz64 04-30-06, 06:23 PM	ya a moon
Rny2 04-30-06, 08:10 PM	well, if the forest world has been staged as a moon, what contact would occur between to these two worlds, to justify the extensive information given about the moon?
dz64 04-30-06, 09:25 PM	i don't no that's all i did was tell every one a world idea i had. not how it works with the rest of the world and beside this is my first world i had to put in a group of plain, forests, and planets
Rny2 04-30-06, 09:46 PM	well, do you have any ideas or suggestions?
the_one_true_shea 05-05-06, 04:12 AM	Hmmm, between here and the moon... the godshell? What about a portal to the moon deep in the center of the world! (thats nicely inversive) Also - just because we know whats on the moon.... Doesnt mean that the populace of the world does. Maybe the centaurs of the moon watch the world, but not vice versa (what with the dragon plauges astronomy might suffer some) or why not vice versa? We gots magics, we gots telescopes... or do we?