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#1 svendj Apr 12, 2013 5:06:53	Pg 08, Horn of Revelry: the text "Each satyr adjacent to you grants you a +1 item bonus to all defenses and saving throws." should be replaced with "You gain a +4 item bonus to all defenses and saving throws." This reflects the (probably intended) wording of the Mirror Image power more accurately, and removes any confusion regarding stacking item bonuses.
#2 Plaguescarred1 Apr 12, 2013 5:14:12	Pg. 05 Hyrsam Fiddlestick Attack is missing the weapon keyword.  Pg. 05 Hyrsam Irresistible Dance Attack's Effect should say target moves unwillingly if its meant to be irresistible. Pg. 10 Tinker Gnome Use What's At Hand Racial Feature has no effect since Improvised Weapons don't have proficiency bonus. Pg. 12 Tinker Gnome Jury Rig Utility's Effect duration should not be until the end of the encounter since its used during a short or extended rest and that such duration otherwise last 5 minutes.
#3 svendj Apr 12, 2013 6:01:34	Pg. 10 Hyrsam Use What's At Hand Racial Feature has no effect since Improvised Weapons don't have proficiency bonus. I think you mean Tinker Gnomes here.
#4 Plaguescarred1 Apr 12, 2013 6:55:33	Oops yeah i was  : )   [EDITED]
#5 wrecan Apr 12, 2013 17:16:37	Pg 08, Horn of Revelry: the item bonus to defenses granted by Horn of Revelry should be cumulative. So: "Each satyr adjacent to you grants you a cumulative +1 item bonus to all defenses and saving throws." I'm pretty sure the word "each" takes care of it.  "Cumulative" implies adding bonuses over time.  Here, the bonus is added once -- when the satyrs first appear. Pg. 05 Hyrsam Fiddlestick Attack is missing the weapon keyword.  Pg. 05 Hyrsam Irresistible Dance Attack's Effect should say target moves unwillingly if its meant to be irresistible.   Doh!
#6 svendj Apr 14, 2013 14:39:38	Pg 08, Horn of Revelry: the item bonus to defenses granted by Horn of Revelry should be cumulative. So: "Each satyr adjacent to you grants you a cumulative +1 item bonus to all defenses and saving throws." I'm pretty sure the word "each" takes care of it.  "Cumulative" implies adding bonuses over time.  Here, the bonus is added once -- when the satyrs first appear.Doh!  Well, item bonuses don't stack, so I would assume the 4 satyr's only give you a +1 defense bonus total. That's what I meant with adding the word cumulative.
#7 wrecan Apr 16, 2013 17:23:36	Pg 08, Horn of Revelry: the item bonus to defenses granted by Horn of Revelry should be cumulative. So: "Each satyr adjacent to you grants you a cumulative +1 item bonus to all defenses and saving throws." I'm pretty sure the word "each" takes care of it.  "Cumulative" implies adding bonuses over time.  Here, the bonus is added once -- when the satyrs first appear.Doh!  Well, item bonuses don't stack, so I would assume the 4 satyr's only give you a +1 defense bonus total. That's what I meant with adding the word cumulative.  Item bonuses don't stack because they are enhancement bonuses, and enhancement bonuses do not stack. The satyr's bonus is untyped.  It stacks.
#8 svendj Apr 17, 2013 2:56:19	Maybe we're reading different versions of the item power.  Show Each satyr adjacent to you grants you a +1 item bonus to all defenses and saving throws. Each time an attack misses you or you succeed on a saving throw, one satyr disappears, and the bonus granted by this power decreases by 1. When the bonus reaches 0, all the satyrs are gone and the power ends. Otherwise, the effect lasts for 1 hour.
#9 wrecan Apr 18, 2013 8:59:18	Maybe we're reading different versions of the item power. You're right.  I forgot that I labeled it an item bonus. The word "cumulative" still wouldn't fix what you are trying to fix because "cumulative" is not a magic word that negates anti-stacking.  The "each" means that you get one item bonus equal to +1 for each satyr.  You seem to want ot use "cumulative" here, but I disagree with you that "cumulative" is the correct word.  I think "each" is the correct word, which is why I wrote it that way. So I think we simply disagree with the appropriate way to connote that you get a single item bonus equal to the number of adjacent satyrs. Also, as a matter of correction, the item bonus is granted by the horn. So the rules for bonuses are absolutely complied with. The horn grants the item bonus.  The value of that bonus is established by the number of satyrs summoned by the horn who remain adjacent to the horn-weilder. So, in short, I understand your complaint.  I simply deny that your issue is an actual problem with the wording.  I think the wording is fine.
#10 svendj Apr 18, 2013 9:03:33	So, in short, I understand your complaint.  I simply deny that your issue is an actual problem with the wording.  I think the wording is fine. Fair enough. But do you agree that the Mirror Image wording is more elegant (if somewhat less flavorful)? By the way, congrats on another publication!
#11 wrecan Apr 18, 2013 10:19:04	do you agree that the Mirror Image wording is more elegant (if somewhat less flavorful)? What is the purpose of me critiquing other professionals' use of words? By the way, congrats on another publication! Thank you/