Is this custom Ranger Backstory Good?

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Nugs2073

Apr 29, 2015 0:20:31

I know this is a lot ,but I am very new to D&D and I was going to Play a ranger none of the backstories seemed to go with the character I was creating, I made my own backstory and I am wonder if is is viable and Good

 

Race-Wood Elf   Name-Selcar

Early life: grew up in the cloakwood forest of the sword coast. since the forest was very dangerous his father Emerin taught him many skills to defend himself if he ever had to. On one of his many hunts with his father and younger brother selcar accidently hurt his brother Harion mortally and Harion later died because Selcar and his father couldn’t get him help in time. After that there was some distance from selcar and his parents ,but his father still tried to reach out to him. Sadly years later is was revealed that Emerin was a thief stealing from the rich and poor for his own gain. Selcar didn’t couldn’t believe it. He went to run and tried to get his mother to come with him and she wouldn’t believe the charges on her husband. Selcar stayed for his mother ,but the soon learned that authorities had captured and executed his father. His mother broke down and ended up burning down her home in order to end her life. Selcar barely escaped and he vowed and would make sure this would happen to any other family. No he travels helping all he can with his skills and hopes to atone for his sins and the sins of his father who he blames for the collapse of his family.

 

Personal Goals: Kill the Orcish warchief Grogmar- The Warchief Grogmar ended up killing Selcars team of rangers which included selcar's best friend and lover because of a tactical mastake of selcar's.Now 5 years later selcar is still hunting the Orc in order to avenge his fallen team. He learned of a possible connection between a group of Goblin raiders around Phandalin and Grogmar. He has now headed there to hopefully get any information on Grogmar no matter it takes. (Favored enemy Orc)

 

Stats

Skills- Investigation,Nature and Survival

Languages- Goblin

Music-Pan flute

 

Special skill- Aid: Because of your ties to the Emerald Enclave you can call on any help from any nearby enclave members and the commom folk are more inclined to accept and Help you when in need.

 

Items-

Studded Leather
Betl Pouch
Hooded Cloak
Enclave Patch and Ring
Longbow
HandAxe

Dagger
Huntng Trap
SpyGlass
Explorer's Pack

 

Peronality-I am quick a Quick to judge others only because I judge myself too much and I am almost always ready for a fight.

 

Ideals-

-Survival-strives to weather anything
-Justice-seeks to end those who harm the innocent

 

Bond-I Seek to attone for the past misdeeds of my own and my father

 

Flaws-

-Sometimes too quick to judge or act
-suspicious of strangers and suspect the worst of them.

 

Str-14 Dex-18 Con-16 Int-13 Wis-16 Cha-9

#2

Mr_Miscellany

Apr 30, 2015 10:14:19

I like it. You have given your character flaws, tragedy and lots of story.

In other words you've given your DM lots of material to work, which is always a good thing.

Let us know how the campaign goes!