Hello D&D community, I'm Da'loach (character name). I recently finished my first novel, a fan-fiction rendition of a home campaign that a few of my friends have been playing for the last few years. After we reached the point of our paragon paths I decided to record our sessions and then novelize the quests, which I did. I made a book out of our game, and I feel very proud of that. The thing is that I have showed it to friends and family alike and they either are not much of readers or don't get what the story is about. Being familiar with D&D, I figured that the Community could help me out by taking a look at one of the sections and giving me their opinions.
Is it good/bad/decent/etc.?
The story is broken up into four short stories focused on our individual questlines. I will include my character's story first (in .PDF format), and go from there.
I hope that likeminded individuals will appreciate the genre of the story and want to read more. I will wait eagerly to hear back...
(Pardon me if I am in the wrong threads, but this is my first post... I am a noob.)
