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#1

Nugs2073

Jun 17, 2015 9:35:29

Hi i am a newish player and I have An idea for a character. I was going to make a genasi character because they sound really cool. Now I have decided to go with monk class because that seems cool and fun. Now I am not sure if the backstory is good and I need help coming up with a charater goal and maybe one more flaw. He is a Fire Genasi Monk

 

Backstory

Life
-Given to a Monestary of ilmater in the swamps of Calimshan as a baby
-Trained by mentor/father figure Trenzog Swiftstrider
-Captured and sold into slavery at Calimport after a raid on the Monestary
-Fought in one of the grand arenas
-Was very sucessful and brought his master much fame and wealth
-Lived a lavish life 
-after seeing the conditions of the lower class slaves he made a plan
-Rebeled against master and began to free slaves
-killed master and escaped the city
-Now is looking for some work and wants to see some of the world


Relationships
-Mother and Father unkown
-Location of the other monks of ilmater unknown
-Worshiper of ilmater
-Befriended some of the slaves

 

Personality:

- I am always trying to Improve myself In anyway possible
-Bold and fierce
-Can be abrasive

 

Idea:Equality-We all bleed, we all suffer together

 

Bond:

-All I have left of my former life is this trinket
-Protects Slaves and the common folk

 

Flaws:-there are a group of people who want me dead for what they see as very good reasons

#2

mellored

Jun 17, 2015 9:39:03

seems good to me.

#3

Nugs2073

Jun 17, 2015 13:09:32

Ya I worked hard on the charater ,but there is only two more things I need one more flaw(More of a personal flaw) and a charater goal

#4

mellored

Jun 17, 2015 13:12:21

Flaw: Disrespects authority of any kind, even those intending to do good.

Goal: Free slaves.

(Reply to #4)

Nugs2073

mellored wrote:
#6

Nugs2073

Jun 17, 2015 20:40:33

What do you think of this

A DragonBorn barbarian for a different game I will be playing soon

 

Life
-Born Into a clan of Brass dragons that lived with there Brass dragon ancestor
-Lived in the Anauroch high in the mountain caves 
-grew to become a strong warrior ,but always had a strong anger in him
-Grew to become leader of the clan after saving the clan from some Orcs with Worgs
-Was a great leader and lead his clan into a time of great peace
-However his clan was attacked by a large party of Zhentarim soldiers
-They ended up killing the whole clan and the Dragon in a long and Bloody battle
-Kriev only survived because he was knocked out
-He now wanders the land trying to find a cause or people worth fighting for 

Goal:Undermine the Zhentarim if possible

 

Personality:

- I was always a natural born leader
-I place no stock in wealthy or well-mannered folk. Money and manners won’t save you

 

Ideals:

-Honor: if I dishonor myself, I dishonor the memory of my Clan

 

Bonds:

-I am the last of my tribe, and it is up to me to ensure their names enter legend.

 

Flaw:

-here’s no room for caution in a life
-I can’t let go of the past, sometimes I lose sleep thinking about old times